Reviews for Underwater Friend
yaoishipsforlife chapter 16 . 8/14/2017
where is hedwig?
automaton14 chapter 17 . 4/10/2017
yeah your writing is difficult to read.
automaton14 chapter 8 . 4/10/2017
Some of these chapters could use an editing pass to make the writing flow better. Also, how old is Harry?
yukino76 chapter 51 . 3/10/2017
good
yukino76 chapter 50 . 3/5/2017
good
yukino76 chapter 49 . 2/15/2017
Dumbles really won't leave them alone
yukino76 chapter 48 . 2/6/2017
good
yukino76 chapter 47 . 1/30/2017
yeah she's back cool
yukino76 chapter 46 . 1/28/2017
no i hope she will still remember
MichaelJ-D chapter 2 . 1/27/2017
You need to make the setting of the narrative clear. I'm still wondering what age he is currently in. What year is he in hogwarts? Etc.
yukino76 chapter 45 . 1/25/2017
good update
yukino76 chapter 44 . 1/22/2017
how will she go back? i hope she have a good plan
nachtdemon chapter 3 . 1/20/2017
In what school year is Harry Potter?
randomplotbunny chapter 43 . 1/19/2017
Wow, Zale is a prick.
yukino76 chapter 43 . 1/17/2017
oh nooooooooooooooooooo
95 | Page 1 2 3 4 .. Last Next »