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Honestly, interesting take on the whole ‘genocidal maniac wants to rule the world’ thing! “I want to rule the world, not destroy it,” isnt something you see often. Typically it doesnt matter how much destruction is needed for their victory for the villain to be satisfied (see: Ganondorf in Ocarina of Time and Twilight Princess), but to have a villain actually *regret* pushing too far and working to remedy his mistakes is refreshing (to a degree anyways, he’s still an evil bastard but he’s an evil bastard with a line in the sand)

It’s all very interesting, and I like it a lot

Thank you, oh gracious authors

And now, he’s as close to whole as he can get, I think

Very good

Ah, my favorite ship dynamic, “heat vampire” and “living oven”

Gajeel’s a real one for sure

Mild spoilers but

Oh my *god* the fact that Natsu’s first words were A: out of concern for being taken from Lucy and B: straight up Lucy’s name is damned *adorable*

Ahh I loved this so much! With many fanfics (including FT fanfics) the buildup to the romance is sudden and underdeveloped but you always build up the romantic development so perfectly, with so many sweet intimate moments - so well written!

Good Fairy Tail fics are EXTREMELY rare, but if the writing quality remains this high I'll be adding this one to a remarkably short list. I honestly don't know where you're going to go with Natsu's character, but I'm curious to find out. The world you've created and the revision of the characters is great. Looking forward to more.

I don’t get it. Golems don’t usually have a will of their own so does Natsu not have a will of his own?

Wonderful story. You both did a great job.

This was so cool! I loved it 3 it was amazing 3 3 your stories are all so wonderful 3 3

Ah! Natsu used his catch phrase 3

Good chapter, I'm loving this story.

time to reread this masterpiece again 3

Amazing StoryI love it