Reviews for Via Sun |
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![]() ![]() ![]() PLEASE CONTINUE THIS! |
![]() ![]() i love it! keep it up. i like your sage's arc, not sure if i like mean neptune. bonus points for grammar one thing- you wrote they don't have their weapons with them, then sun uses his staff thingy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really cool. I love the characterisation of everyone and anything with a well-written Sun is good. Arslan is always a win as well. I love the look at Vacuo and how it would have shaped Sun's upbringing, and the reference to his eyes seeing through illusions and stuff. Like the Original Monkey King and his Special Demon Eyes. Sage is great. I love the 'hurts like a bitch' line. it made me laugh. And Pyrrha is adorable. What a sweetheart. |
![]() ![]() I need more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is amazing! I REALLY hope you're going to continue this cause it's amazing and I love it. I know that life gets in the way and I understand that you might not have the time, but I have never read anything like this before and I am soooo excited to see what happens next. Update whenever you're able, just know that I'm super excited for it. |
![]() ![]() I'd love for this to Continue! 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like this a nice look into what turned Sun into the man he is in the show hope to see more of this at some point |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yo there! I find this fanfic interesting, particularly in the worldbuilding and the character aspects! I may have different hypotheses regarding Vacuo, Mistral, Team SSSN, and all that, but hey, your writing helps me think about the possibilities! So yeah, keep on learning and doing your best, dear writer! |
![]() ![]() I love this so much! Please continue! |
![]() ![]() Love this story :D |
![]() ![]() Smol Pyrrha is smol and I am greatly pleased. I'm definitely digging sassy tree mom Sage. This is great so far. Props! |
![]() ![]() SnowWhiteApplesauce here, too lazy to log in, but this is tops. Excellent work. Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() This is great! You really capitalize on the personalities of the character! Thanks so much for writing about SSSN |
![]() ![]() ![]() YES SOMEONE ELSE THINKS THAT SAGE IS A HEALER I love little RWBY characters. You write them so well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was an awesome read and I can't wait to see where you go with it. |