Reviews for The Terran Intervention
BadReader chapter 6 . 3/28/2017
I don't know anything about Mass Effect, but this is interesting.
UNSC ODST chapter 6 . 3/28/2017
Great story, it's nice to see Stargate crossovers still being written. And the tech progression of the Taur'i is what is imagine them going down given time and access to Atlantis. Is the story more going to follow the ME side with the Stargate side only in the background, it will there be contact in time between them? Can't wait for the next chapter.
Guest chapter 5 . 3/27/2017
Omnitools replaced cell phonea
Aramus13 chapter 6 . 3/27/2017
Awesome update! I've reread this entire story, and nice changes. The bad reality of war, the unpreparedness in statistic and logistic, really enjoyable to read. Can't wait for the next chapter.
tpx1 chapter 6 . 3/26/2017
great story so far
please continue!
radtej chapter 6 . 3/26/2017
Cool, glad to see you are still writing. I think the changes are for the better. Looking forward to more.
EvilTheLast chapter 6 . 3/26/2017
Good update. I had to reread the first five chapters just in case there was some major changes. Nope.
rice2999 chapter 6 . 3/26/2017
Finally a new chapter. Update soon.
Mf0012 chapter 6 . 3/26/2017
Yeaaaaay you updated it!
deathleader chapter 6 . 3/26/2017
*Starts to make a whining sound* Nooooooo, don't play with Reaper Tech... Nothing ever good comes from playing with Reaper Tech
Hadrian.Caesar chapter 6 . 3/26/2017
nice chapter. a bit short but good. I am looking foreward to the next update
EklipsCz chapter 6 . 3/26/2017
Glad to see an updates for both your stories. So first, stalling is the best thing the humans can do, I have to agree on it. As a reader who knows the history of the mass effect its obvious that Citadel ambassador will hide a dirt history in their pocket and showing only information benefiting the image of peace and best species.

As many other writers told as by proxy from their stories, there is many things citadel council are not telling to their new neighbor, to list but a bit : batarian slavers, Quarian exiles, Krogan genocide, Spacter agents with unlimited power, STG saboters who steal anything and everything, Asari and their Protean VI artefacts, and many more.

With all this informations (the true kodex needs to by mined from turian ships) and a bad first contact its not unthinkable to just not join with the Citadel at all, if that doesnt sits well with your plans for story, at last gain something realy big and important from treaty-more worlds and sektors in direction of turian space or the best would by some of their repair outpost near human space- to have buffer between and to explor how they maintenance their border ships with all the technology left there.

Second is more of the ideas, cant realy tell anything to space fighters, in some sci-fi it works and some dont mention at all- its on you to make it work- probably give them some edge like too fast and small for automatic defense, shoting at engines and cripling bigger ships.
Other is how to block the relay. the best would be 3 satellites with EMP field between them, shame they dont have this technology-at last not yet- SG humans may have give them a research bit for it as an unknow benefactor. Well anything flying through would just shut down.

Or drag some asteroid to relay and have a mass effect generator to max its mass. slowing ships (at last the bigger ones) would crash on it- only something like Normandy SR-1 could resist the artifical gravity, and ships thet would know to avoid it.

And thet is all for know :) looking for new update.
Guest chapter 6 . 3/26/2017
Great chapter. I saw no need for the revised changes, but still a great read.
Guest chapter 6 . 3/25/2017
Dam, someone actually shows humans with smart leadership. Refreshing! Great fic so far.
Guest chapter 5 . 3/25/2017
The fic is very enjoyable but I'm not sure how realistic the idea is of fighters. Granted you are in good company with Lucas using them in Star Wars but that was also created in the 1970s. Even with planes today in 2017 it looks like the Air Force is only likely to have manned fighters for another generation or two at the most. Two hundred years from now? Maybe there's a reason beyond stupid aliens that Citadel civilizations did not use fighters? They make no sense.
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