Hello, I apologize if my English is not the best, but I love your story (even though I haven't finished it) but I'm Brazilian and I would like to know if it's okay for you if I translate/readapt it to Portuguese.

to this day I find myself coming back to this story it just is that good!

Wonderful chater amazing chemistry and bond between those two

I have one clear issue with this fic so far. I genuinely don't get why Clark and Kara are so broken as if the world betrayed them. It's just the Government and they pull shit like this all the time, even in the comics so I am not catching the drift here, like at all. Also, I would add that Clark and Kara giving up on the world because one group of assholes is NOT a good portrayal of their characters. I know you want to bring their humanized version to the forefront but this is not the way to go about it and if anything it only makes them look weak-willed.

Why do Kara’s parents seem to think its their right to tell everyone about her and Barrys baby?

I mean, first they told the FATHER, and next Joe. Like, its a big deal for parents and they are just did it without a second thought.

Alex definately needs to mind her own business when it comes to Kara and Barry’s relationships.

Yoooo does this mean batman is around here. Bc kara asked about gotham before saying it wasnt a city on earth 1 map so makes sense if batman exists bit wouldnt kara know?

I just read this for the 4th time over the past couple years. Still as amazing as the first time. Will always be my favorite story. I hope you’re doing well where ever you are in life right now.

Kara aint as fast as barry

Fantastic story. I think this is the first Kara/Barry pairing that I've ever read but it was great. Loved Lexie, loved Alex with Nyssa, all in all this was amazing. Thank you for sharing your vision with the rest of us.

No idea why you overpowered Diana more than anyone else. According to all sources, SupermanWonderwomen. Yet here, we have WonderwomenThe entire Justice League at the same time (including an overpowered Supergirl and Flash).

I personally don’t mind when someone is beyond everyone else if that is how it’s suppose to be, but it seems like you left everyone else as they are, gave Barry and Kara a 5x boost, and then gave Diana a 100x boost. Really weird choice that makes no sense.

Eh. Jeremiah continuously threatening Barry is kinda cringe given that Barry would flatten him without effort. And then there is Barry acting scared and everyone feeling sorry for him like he should be terrified. Barry should be respectful, given that it is Kara’s Dad but I have no idea why you’re acting like Jeremiah is stronger than Superman and actually has the ability to back up his claims.

It’s like if Mike Tyson was dating the average persons child. He’d be respectful but he wouldn’t be shaking and stuttering when threatened, nor would anyone be like “haha, I feel so sorry for Mike”.

I got chills with the Superman scenes, kinda reminded me of Anakin and Vader, I can imagine it, "Clark Kent is gone, J'onn. I am what remains."

amazing chapter. i’m rolling i can’t stop laughing. loved it

Absolutely amazing story- I laughed so hard in so many places. Finally finished it after 5 days of reading! Wonderful