Amazing. I LOVED it

The next to last paragraph about the broomstick... Im cackling

Really enjoyed reading this. Thank you!

That last line tho.. Thats the mic drop moment. Also Todd lowkey adopted him. This is the beginning. Hes in for the most part

I wanna know what his parents and Draco thinking so baddd. Im cackling cause of her outfit and also so so proud of our girl

Sis... You gotta start covering your wrist in nonchalant ways. Im lmao

One of the best dramione fics I've read. I absolutely love the concept of a resorting and everything that comes after. The way you wrote Draco and Hermione's relationship and how they slowly came to understand eachother was so well done. I love this!

The cramps... I wont spoil the story, I will just say cramps.. Im cackling about the cramps

Oh Cissa would hate that line. A muggle not wanting to touch her. Im cackling. Good one Natalie

I love Dramione and can appreciate when theres no ron bashing. Thank you

I genuinely wonder if Theo is crushing on Hermione or Olliver cause why does he go so hard to mess with her. Granted its not blood related thankfully. Is it cause she sized him up automatically assuming he was gonna bully her and now hes like "f it. since you thought i was, now i will but without the blood issues" ? im genuinely curious. Did he feel slighted?

Luna STAY knowing things. I love her

I’m so glad you did an epilogue, this was the perfect way to wrap it up. I was particularly curious if Draco was going to have to feel Hermione’s labour pains, lol. Though that would definitely have been an entertaining plot point. Phenomenally well written story. Your characterizations were excellent. The only constructive criticism I would like to offer is that the French in the Paris chapter needs some work— unless you meant for the French woman (the name escapes me) to speak overly casual/familiar to Hermione, the use of the singular “you” in French when speaking to a stranger is considered rude. The verbs should have been conjugated for the plural “youaka vous). I think there might also have been some accents missing, but I can’t recall for certain. I’d also suggest using italic font for the French, as italics commonly denote a different language and it would be more readable, especially when the characters are mixing French and English.

Very much enjoying this story so far, but had to interrupt my reading for a tiny little edit… when Hermione arrives at home, it should say she opens the boot, not the trunk. British lingo and all that. (I’m not British, but that wording stood out.)

loving all the Greek references