Reviews for What You Want Now
KiKi74 chapter 1 . 7/6/2021
Can't get motivated for my own fics, so I'm reading this one, again.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/3/2018
Ohhhhhh so good!
Niki fanfic Reader chapter 1 . 9/1/2018
This was great. Always liked Tasmin and felt sorry she got the raw end of the deal. Thank you for writing and sharing.
BlueSappho chapter 1 . 5/30/2016
You tell a tale extremely well, a fanfic is only good when you can see what you're reading, excellent work!
msmukamo chapter 1 . 5/27/2016
Sooo beautiful!
yin1994 chapter 1 . 4/28/2016
I enjoy this story very much.
Reading what Bo thought is amazing. I like how you describe all her feelings.
Write another for us? Please?
terrihead1 chapter 1 . 4/26/2016
I love stories that give us the thoughts with the actions! Thanks for sharing your story!
Dragonfly00 chapter 1 . 4/22/2016
what a beautiful portrait of their connection.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/20/2016
I loved this story. You have captured the heart and soul of Bo.
krdavis14 chapter 1 . 4/18/2016
What an impressive (and successful might I add) foray into doccubus fanfiction this is! Really well done in my opinion. I completely felt Bo's multitude of emotions here (e.g., despair, frustration, fear, insecurity, determination, fierceness/protectiveness (not sure these are emotions?), love, etc). I am hoping you have more up your proverbial doccubus sleeve to share with us! Maybe a companion piece next in Lauren's POV? Either way, thank you - I enjoyed reading this one!
ShinyLight chapter 1 . 4/17/2016
This was really good. Short and sweet but the fact that you gave into detail how Bo truly felt adds to that whole love scene even more. It was a great read thank you.
pari.pillu chapter 1 . 4/16/2016
guest chapter 1 . 4/14/2016
wow, this was awesome. i love Bo's stream of conscious thoughts - i have always loved stories that show a fierce Bo who loved and protects Lauren, and this is one of the best! thank you! i look forward to reading more from you.
FrenChi chapter 1 . 4/14/2016
I love it! At least, it's sooo clear that Bo loves Lo in your story and Fanfics, in general :) If only the show gave us that. "Sigh".
Hope for a new story, soon :)
Tooblind chapter 1 . 4/13/2016
Thanks for that. I love in-depth studies of canon scenes. I guess I feel the show left so much unexplained that there's room for more exploration.
I can understand Bo's jealousy of Lauren working for Evony but I have always felt frustrated that Bo couldn't understand why Lauren stayed with the dark in S4. Also, I hope by now Bo would have understood Lauren's true intentions when they slept together that first time, and not seen it as a betrayal.
Thank for sharing.
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