Can't get motivated for my own fics, so I'm reading this one, again.

Ohhhhhh so good!

This was great. Always liked Tasmin and felt sorry she got the raw end of the deal. Thank you for writing and sharing.

You tell a tale extremely well, a fanfic is only good when you can see what you're reading, excellent work!

Sooo beautiful!

I enjoy this story very much.
Reading what Bo thought is amazing. I like how you describe all her feelings.
Write another for us? Please?

I love stories that give us the thoughts with the actions! Thanks for sharing your story!

what a beautiful portrait of their connection.

I loved this story. You have captured the heart and soul of Bo.

What an impressive (and successful might I add) foray into doccubus fanfiction this is! Really well done in my opinion. I completely felt Bo's multitude of emotions here (e.g., despair, frustration, fear, insecurity, determination, fierceness/protectiveness (not sure these are emotions?), love, etc). I am hoping you have more up your proverbial doccubus sleeve to share with us! Maybe a companion piece next in Lauren's POV? Either way, thank you - I enjoyed reading this one!

This was really good. Short and sweet but the fact that you gave into detail how Bo truly felt adds to that whole love scene even more. It was a great read thank you.

Lovely!"

wow, this was awesome. i love Bo's stream of conscious thoughts - i have always loved stories that show a fierce Bo who loved and protects Lauren, and this is one of the best! thank you! i look forward to reading more from you.

I love it! At least, it's sooo clear that Bo loves Lo in your story and Fanfics, in general :) If only the show gave us that. "Sigh".
Hope for a new story, soon :)

Thanks for that. I love in-depth studies of canon scenes. I guess I feel the show left so much unexplained that there's room for more exploration.
I can understand Bo's jealousy of Lauren working for Evony but I have always felt frustrated that Bo couldn't understand why Lauren stayed with the dark in S4. Also, I hope by now Bo would have understood Lauren's true intentions when they slept together that first time, and not seen it as a betrayal.
Thank for sharing.