imagine thinking you are no longer a kid because something bad happened to you kids are stupid still regardless of experience like harry passing out from a boggart he knows is a boggart a dementor boggart is one thing its still got a bit of the dementors powers a boggart pretending to be your friends when you know its a boggart making you pass out is pathetic

Shiva is both a mans name and a womans name just because a god is named Shiva doesn't mean woman cant be named that there are countries in the middle east that use Shiva as a females name Parvati come off as a pretentious pos here and could have informed them the god was male nicely but honestly its a nickname who cares who uses it

the crazy thing about what they did to fred, is that it is one of the biggest things a wizard can do without magic. making a potion doesn't include waving a wand or anything like that. nothing "spellcasting" about it

i love how much... "black"? is in this andromeda. i don't think i've read many fanfics where she would go for payback... you know... sorry this sentance got away from me...

especially when the eye can see through a fucking invisibility cloak... one of the deathly hallows to boot. like... how the hell does that work. "moody" could see harry with a magic eye, yet death couldn't find his ancestor until they themselves chose to die

dude, the loophole when it comes to house elves being freed is crazy. as long as it's any piece of clothing that has been tossed, the elf can grab it before it hit shte ground and consider it being given to them, bam they are free

oh fuck... nvm i just realized that lockheart wasn't obliviating tracey and she just has the book. i'm just dumb, but you can definetly see where i was coming from

oh no... is tracey being obliviated by lockhear, man's a basterd. btw, i absolutly love writers like you who recommend other stories. at the end of this fic, i am definetly going back and looking through all of them for stories that interest me

Where is my fucking review, I know I’ve read and reviewed this garbage. Can’t believe how people actually ate this sht up. Incomparably worse than my immortal, at least my immortal was funny. This is just sad. Only social rejects write a harem story with this much femslash. It’s like you’re an alien writing about relationships, that’s how fucking out of touch every relationship in this fic feels, romantic or otherwise.

you really brought in the antagonist from Rosario vampire huh? bravo!

The not activating runes at the dursleys part is kinda sketchy. only. the wand is traced and activating a rune isn really a spell a d infusing magic without it should. be far easier. than other stuff(should be similar to potions and the stirring and that was canon)

Hmm till now honestly rather disappointed Harry still seems rather wimpy and. far too light/idiotic.
with his treatment he shouldnt really care too much if something is harmless to his relatives.
If this stays its probable he will be a total simp later on too.

till now the stuff with runes seem nice but rather useless if it needs that ultralong time to. work out an then. there. still is the problem of making it work materialwise for longterm

"Lots of French in this chapter. Rough translation for those interested"... this is a story written in English... so your writing dialog into a story in a different language that you don't think people who can't read it would want to know what it says? if it's so unimportant why write it. I'll never understand why some authors do this, it really takes away from a story to either not know what's said or have to go look for the translation then re find where you left off, specially if reading on your phone. I normally let it go but the "for this interested" comment just got me.
otherwise so far a great story and hope this French written dialog doesn't continue.

46 chapters. 46 fucking chapters for Harry to get a lemon. Holy shit

You write a yuri lemon between lily and shiva but not Harry fucking his girls? Something ain’t right