Reviews for Delicious Relationship
Vanessa chapter 2 . 7/27/2016
Woman, when u can come backkk please!srsly. I enjoy your fics.
liane chapter 2 . 6/13/2016
POPURI! Sorry for being too excited but she's my favourite bachelorette, Goddess of chicken! and yes Claire, the concentration of pretty girls in Mineral Town IS ridiculous. I find it really hard to choose between Karen, Popuri and Ann but in the end Popuri always wins for me XD Even when I play the game as Claire, I would end up giving too many gifts to Popuri, Karen instead of Gray. and I agree, HM is also my little corner of joy whenever I need to take a break from real life.
anyway, this was a nice chapter! I like how everyone is so welcoming. If I may offer a piece of advice, its nice that Claire is welcomed by everyone and all but I hope she doesn't become friends with all of them in such a short period of time, just because sometimes it feels a tad too unrealistic XD Looking forward to the rest of the story :D
liane chapter 1 . 6/13/2016
Okay, how did I miss this gem? because Im pretty sure I've read every single Gray/Claire fanfic on this website. Anyway, Great start! And well, Claire, I don't blame you for thinking of something so cliche, Gray is dreamy. xD
and can I just say, I love how you took the time to describe Claire's new residence? also, I hope we'll get to learn why Claire decided to leave her old life
DipANutella chapter 2 . 5/24/2016
It sure is going along pretty well. Keep it up! :3
DipANutella chapter 1 . 5/24/2016
I could very well say that this will be a fantastic story! The only problem is that there are some grammatical errors... Other than that, this is going to be big I tell you. I was really happy that Claire wasn't the type of girl who would easily 'fall' for someone, y'know like she guarded up her heart or somethingAs for Gray... Yeah he came out like a jerk XD
hobo ghost chapter 1 . 5/21/2016
you described Zack in such beautiful form... my heart wavering (lol) keep up the good work, I really like your work
Mnemah chapter 1 . 5/15/2016
You do very well writing in English! You have some errors but nothing major, keep writing you will only become better and better each time! I do beta-reading for YellowMoonFlower for the story "Hunter and Little Red Riding Hood (English)" It is a very good fantasy story about Claire and Gray, you should read it if you are looking for more stories to read! It will make you cry though lol :)
Vanesa chapter 1 . 5/14/2016
Im enjoying it so forward to read more
Mnemah chapter 2 . 5/1/2016
That is exactly how I feel about Harvest Moon! I love the games Friends of Mineral Town as well as Back to Nature and 64 (all these games have the same characters). I still escape to the Harvest Moon world. It is such a magical place in my mind. You captured it nicely here in your story, but I look forward to a little bit of drama in your next chapter! You know, things can't always go good right?
Lana chapter 2 . 4/26/2016
Love the story so far. Great job :D Looking forward to read more...
Goldengirl2-t chapter 2 . 4/27/2016
Keep it up!
PageCaterpillar chapter 1 . 4/21/2016
It is a good start. I miss this game. Anyway, I look forward to the next chapter!