Cool story, not the drugs though...
Don’t do drugs kids.

So will you be updating this because you left this off on a cliffhangers

It's been almost half a year. I truely hope you come back someday. Love your stories.

I was wondering how your trip went since you mentioned you'd be gone for a while and holy cow! It sounds like it was intense! Did the rest of the trip go ok at least if you exclude the dog attack and broken hard drive?

Please update, I love this story

Okayyyyy... this is getting weirder by the second... I don't know how to react on this.

Let me just have a minute to commend how fabulous Margaret Plants is? She's a whole different rabbit than Judy Hopps (but still, Judy's the best bunny gal there).

This plot is a lot more blurry than the other one since it doesn't have a ... uhnnm... like, a platform yet? No definite clues in the present time.

So yeah. Hope you could update this. Good luck! [_]

Ohhhhh~
This. Is. Dangerous.
This. Is. Edgier.
I fear that this is would not go well... I don't think.. Oh what the hell, on with the next chapter! I LOVE Judy and Nick's undercover identities! I'm just gonna be out for a while.

Logical self: yeah, but remember you still have that exam and you don't even have the handouts yet

Me: surrreeee. There are only seven chapters to go. No harm done, right? Right?

damn son! what a fic... its all weird and contrasting from the movie but oh so its original and a really good read, nice fic!

Hahahah! Your one of my favorite authors now! I love your fanfics, alot! This one proved it!

Huh. This is like a vision quest. Discovering something profound about themselves and their feelings for their partner with every experience. Its a really very interesting idea and the visuals you describe really bring it to life. Excellent work.

I am not sure what to think of this. It's not the drug use, per se. More like I'm unsure of their reactions. I mean, I guess I can see how a con artist like Nick might have used recreational drugs, but I'm having a hard time imagining it.

Inspite of my confusion I do find this very intriguing. I love anything unique and I am sure I have not read anything else that touched on Judy ever trying drugs. Except for Nighthowler, of course.

Anyway, I guess what I am saying is I am looking forward to more.

i like it a lot. its very original

This is going to be brilliant

Keen underwater sequence.

Excellent beginning.