Thank you for sharing your work with us.

You have ‘changed a lot’, but what have you actually changed? I expect the mountain to be coming back soon enough, or at least someone like him. You keep to the plot for the stupidest of reasons. Teaching tyron a lesson? Really? When the guy would be receptive to naruto’s words? He is ‘helping ned’, yet doing nothing of the sort. Keeping him in the dark, making dumb decisions like listening to mr little finger? If the war of the 5 kings continues the exact same, then this really is a waste of words.

And why has naruto not taken out the ‘white walkers’? He casually killed a few thousand troops with a swing of a sword. Why has he not killed them all yet? Culled their numbers at least to stop them from having the strength to attack and preventing the issue from occurring? The night king only attacked when he had the numbers, so if kept low if for some dumb reason he can’t outright solve the issue in his near god like level of power, then he could keep the realms of men safe near indefinitely till the armies of the living take him out permanently.

This is frankly getting stupid.

Ah! Yes, another fanfic writer who refuses to change anything in the work. I wonder, do you consider two works that have the exact same plot that is executed in almost the exact same way, the same novel? Because i do. How can you consider reading the same work a second time interesting? You know whats going to happen, so where is the suspense? Where is the interest in finding out what the inclusion of a new influence in the story will be? Where is the interest in a work when despite adding in someone who has super sensitive hearing, the ability to wipe out armies, and see the future, ABSOLUTELY NOTHING CHANGES? The amount of plot holes in this work by your absolute insistence on keeping to the original story is honestly astounding. You made naruto too op to fit the role you have given him. If you had him as someone just entertaining himself watching the mortals be idiots, it would make sense. But as someone trying to help? No. Not where you place him. He would know there were people in the tower. And thats not to mention the simple fact the dire wolves would not be thrown of by a bit of sprayed perfume. Thats dumb as fuck and clearly shows your absolute ignorance of canine ability.

I can already tell i will be dropping this next chapter since you have already shown your inability to write a fanfiction - since this is practically plagiarism, just with an inconsequential bystander who adds nothing other than some words to the chapter? If you consider writing content like this, just stop and save us all the time rereading a work we have already read through.

I just hope im proven wrong in the next chapter, but with what i have seen, its a misplaced hope. Actually, considering my thoughts, its just me putting off having to search for a new work in this particular genre.

Huh so his trapped son doesnt really have a role... nice read anyway!

Estuvo muy entretenido tu Fic.
Gracias

In the words of a southern man this is One of the good ones

Not a fan of daenerys literally ordering naruto around or even really getting mad when other people are disrespecting her. He has become too close it feels. It feels like he has taken the role of daario from the show. Instead of just being a spectator to make sure she doesnt follow in her brothers footsteps, he's literally helping her achieve things that arent difficult at all. She doesnt even need an army as long as he is in her corner

Couldnt he have created shadow clones to help to contain the damage?

This story is written by someone with a poor grasp of the lore behind Game of Thrones (ASOIAF). His knowledge is limited to the TV series-incomplete as it was at the time this was written.

It makes for a poor showing considering this story started from the beginning of Robert’s Rebellion, and does not account for the most important character either, thus marginalizing him.

Why would Naruto not kill Gregor and the other guy? Why do all of you brain dead morons always have Naruto spare them? Jesus, you people should all just disappearforever.

Bro u fucked it up Naruto shouldn’t have worked deanarys that made him look like a bitch

Nice copy and paste job. 10/10 for not changing a thing and making Naruto useless.

ch 1 cring max 9000x

He makes threats but actively does nothing such a waste

This is basically GOT…Naruto knows what’s going on but won’t do anything I won’t be surprised if Ned dies because he was ‘surprised’ or didn’t expect it what’s the use of all his powers if he’s not actively using it