Okay im sorry but why are the akatsuki so overpowered in this novel lol like if you want them to win fights try separating people more or something. This duo would never be able to pull that off like what

So somehow they extracted the one tails in less than an hour? And somehow sasori and deidra can out maneuver every kage and multiple jinchurki? I mean come on they couldnt even beat narutos team 7 with the granny yet you want us to believe they can evade and best the entire alliance at once?

Dunno. The Naruto in this is kinda an asshole.

Ai and Yugito are fucking dicks. So is Jiraiya. Christ I feel bad for Naruto here.

Okay. How the hell is Naruto the one with the lowest prestige?

He's stronger than Fu. He's the son of a kage and descended from two legendary clans/lineages. Trained by a sanin who was trained by another kage who was trained by two other kages. He's related to three other kages. He's the container of the strongest biju.

Also this is extremely unfair to Naruto. The women are being complete bitches to him. For something outside of his control and are over reacting.

Damn. Fu is the only reasonable one. The others, aside from mei who hasn't done or said much, are cunts.

I mean, he could give up on Sasuke and not destroy his character.

Ciertamente un ahistoria maravillosa.

Hi

Great story! Thanks for writing it.

The only reason I think he stopped writing because he realized his story had nowhere to go he wrote himself into the ground and that's what bad fanfiction writers do on a day by day basis the too busy focusing on relationships rather than the story.

This story is supposed to take place during the events of Naruto shippudory welcome home pilot episode cuz none of just returned with Jiraiya from training mission so now do we be approximately 15 or 16 at this time Naruto shippudory I wish you luck on the future fan fiction endeavors and my cat says mew translation as she transforms into Shang tsung from mortal Kombat and says flawless victory Sub-Zero wins fatalities ️ just kidding

Naruto is just'wish fulfillment

Yeaaah. Deidara is hella overconfident... Which isn't good for these guys at all... They're meant to hunt the bijuu down when they're alone. Only Gaara was gone after inside his village because Sand while having a high average for skill don't have any TRULY powerful S rank Ninja aside from the Kage.

The author is pulling stupid shenanigans outta his ass for the plot's sake and Naruto feels weaker than his pre-Shippuden genin self.

Overall, meh.