Reviews for Flaws
ClaryJackson2000 chapter 15 . 12/16/2017
OMG i love it, its soo good
lilrose88 chapter 15 . 11/7/2017
OMG very emotional story. Great job! Please update soon!
muddier waters chapter 15 . 8/18/2017
just realized I haven't read this in awhile and I actually missed some chapters but ahhhh I loved this one
SammyBee30 chapter 15 . 8/18/2017
What a cliffhanger! I can't wait for the next chapter! Brilliant writing, I'm so invested in this story!
soccerlover21 chapter 15 . 8/18/2017
Beautifully written, I love how emotionally you write. It really makes it real
666Spektor chapter 15 . 8/17/2017
Omg please update!
wolfstars chapter 15 . 8/17/2017
I like how you write Theo & how it allows in insight into the other side of the war. Poor Hermione at the end. She just can't catch a break.
Thanks for the update!
riversgirl75 chapter 15 . 8/16/2017
So glad you're updating this story again!
RoseLillyTulip chapter 15 . 8/16/2017
Oh no! Hermione I get you needing space from the boys but please talk to Theo! He would understand!

lol besides my useless ramblings... I just wanted to say I enjoyed this chapter a ton and I'm super excited to see what happens next!
Guest chapter 15 . 8/16/2017
Ah where does this chapter lead? Tho helping her? Someone coming to threat has her screaming? I don't know but I love this story and im so happy for the update. Thanks
Primrue chapter 15 . 8/16/2017
Oh, and Dolohov is garbage *flips him off*
Primrue chapter 15 . 8/16/2017
Hoooooollllyyyyyyyy daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaammmmmmmmmmmmnnnnnnnnnnnn
that was intense. I loved it. Theo, that was brutal but thank you, Hermione needs to realise she needs to talk about it. However, the feeling at the end, you could just sense the tension rising and how she eventually would pop and then she did and just wow, well written, my dear.
Now to talk from the start of the chapter: Man, it's been sad all around today. Hermione can't even take solace in reading anymore, shiet. And then Ron...I understand both their sides and it's agony! But Hermione now isolating herself with the boys gone... though I ship them so much, I know that it's not like Fred is gonna "adopt" her. He'll just try his best to not freak her out whenever they see each other, but Hermione won't be out and about anytime soon so the moments will be scarce. Then there's Theo. What he did for her now was for her but I don't think he'll seek her out either. He knows what she's going through but he's not gonna coddle her, which means he'll be tough and maybe even visibly show his disapproval of her ways when their in public.
Basically, Hermione is gonna feel so alone.
Right after Hermione storms out of Theos room, someone (*cough* Fred *cough*) sees her upset and then sees Theo chse her and connect the dots in a bad way. Hermione'll be like anxious to get out of there so nothing will be said but suspicion builds. THEN Fred might want to keep a more attentive eye on her or something...hmmmm
Anyway, loved this chapter as I do all the chapters. Your story is magical and so are you but damnit for what you did to Daphne. Mwah!
JuliW chapter 15 . 8/16/2017
OMG! This chapter was amazing, one of your best. Can't believe you left us with that end... you better update soon.
Please don't torture us with the waiting
See you soon
soccerlover21 chapter 14 . 8/10/2017
Love it, love everything, can't wait for more!
Karatekid-Ninja chapter 14 . 6/25/2017
Really enjoying this story so far. I kinda hate how Harry is treating Hermione. I mean Ron I get cause his an arse but not Harry. Anyway great job can't wait for the next chapter xx
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