Reviews for Steward, Captain, and King
wotumba1 chapter 1 . 4/27/2016
marmota-b chapter 1 . 4/19/2016
Note on readability: Your notes inside the individual pieces are not in any way differentiated, which makes it really confusing, and takes one right out of the story, breaking any possible connections between the pieces that would have arisen from uninterrupted reading. It would be much better to move them all to the end, and put them under a divider or in italics or something.