what the actual fuck?! The OC are shining more than the real ones. tf is this

Not so sure about the repeat “last second save” for Leila and Oz. I mean at least for me it comes across as a glaring plot armour. Besides that the rest of the chapter was great.

wow Cinder is so pathetic lol

like this so far but this OC is so fucking unnecessary and pointless lol, idk why you wanted to add her so badly xd.. but oh well

If Ot Marybelle saw this in the afterlife ,she gonna say angrily " This isn't fair ! I want my screentime with my Lulu" while Ot Lelouch hiding in the corner afraid of being raped by Marybelle and saw the timeline,says regret fully " God Damnit I'm really stupid , I shouldn't have waste my good chance to redeem myself for something stupid like Suzaku"

Yeah, Nunnally was still a dumbass. Also, is D.S still immortal? Yay for Cera losing her code :3 Marrybell still got shafted. Oof. Poor girl. Honestly, D.S was probably my favorite girl, and this so odd because I usually abhor . She was such a breath of fresh air though. I liked Marrybel alot though. Nunnally is usually among my favorites but she really got butchered sadly. Fitting end for Suzaku, he didn't deserve to witness the perfect world. Arthur was probably the best male character (aside from Lelouch ofc!). Cinder is Cinder and I will probably never like her simply because of who she originally is. I will admit you did make her somewhat likable though. I liked CC in the beginning, truly I loved her being there for Lelouch especially defending him against Suzaku. But she lost all of my respect keeping Nunnally and Zero Requiem from Lelouch. Kaguya was too set on old Japan and it's old traditions and restrictions. But she was pretty chill once she got some sense finally knocked into her pseudo blond head.

Lelouch was an absolute treat pretty much the entire story. well done with him.

This story was mostly good. I loved all of the support that Lelouch got and the romances were mostly well done, except Marrybell. The only question I even have for this story is why Nunally was such a dumbass?

nunnaly is a piece of sht and her plan was plan idiotic. she would have killed millions for nothing, it was entirely pointless. tha k god lelouch is lelouch.

you made william weak.

honestly, what they did was pure abuse. simple as.

kicking lloyds nuts was definitely excessive

shouldnt ds know x is double crossing

wow, nunnally is seriously a piece of work as well...

finally he died. plot armor was exceedingly thick

good for suzaku losing his mind. srupid friggen nunnally tho.