|Reviews for Your World|
| kingsckross chapter 14 . 12/19/2018
just rereading this and omg. i adore this fic (and whole series tbh). hazel is such a good character and i love that of all the people its dylan who knows james' secret!
| illjwamh chapter 14 . 12/17/2017
I really like these characters, and the relationship you've built up between them is delightfully genuine. I hope to see more of them in future stories.
| libbypotter chapter 13 . 12/16/2017
Just a thought, why wasn’t Scorpius invited?
| libbypotter chapter 14 . 12/16/2017
I very rarely like OC but I love yours. I am really looking forward to more of your stories
| libbypotter chapter 12 . 12/16/2017
Poor Anna and poor Hazel too. Really interesting take on memory charms from a Muggle point of view
| libbypotter chapter 9 . 12/16/2017
Serious. Have to laugh
| libbypotter chapter 7 . 12/16/2017
Great take on a Muggle point of view
| libbypotter chapter 6 . 12/16/2017
Civil conversation! Lovely interaction
| libbypotter chapter 4 . 12/16/2017
I usually don’t like it when a character goes from being a playboy to a good considerate boyfriend. However here James’ transformation has been gradual and believable. Also lovely to see some of Rose.
| sydneysages chapter 14 . 12/6/2017
I can't believe this is over!
I'm really impressed with how James dealt with the whole Dylan thing, and then the ending was brilliant. I also love the sort of middle ground between JAmes and HAzel, and I think it really fits the characters
Can't wait for the return of Iseult Malfoy
| Colonel92 chapter 1 . 12/5/2017
I've read all of your stories in this arc. They are all amazing. I'm so pleased jamie found his happiness. This was a fantasti story
| EyoO chapter 1 . 12/5/2017
Yeah I prefer to begin my review with this kind of no sense word which I’m not sure exist but describe something amazing and surprising because I guess it defines your story pretty well.
I fumbled on this story quite randomly. I’m an avid fan of James S Potter fanfiction and I though that this “spin off”? could be interesting so I went on with it and for sure I’m pretty happy to have done it.
It’s one of the rare time I read a story like that. I mean in Harry Potter you heard all about half blood witch but you never really have a story about a couple like that. And what a couple Hazel and James make such a sweet couple and give a real vibe. It kinds of make me think of a relationship I had me French with a Japanese coming from a very traditional family well with much more real love in this story though! You have to do effort for the other, accept what she is and sometimes it’s extremely hard because she literally does stuff in an opposite way of you. But yeah it was nicely done.
Now I’m extremely curious about your other works, because the writing of this story was so smooth, with enough description to feel in it, a narrative style not childish at all like you helas too often see on fanfic. YCharacters of course well though as I said before. Even the plot in such a short story was wonderful. I love that Anna wasn’t able to accept the truth, well at least for now but that Dylan was eager to do so. Yeah humans are different and you really get it.
Everytime I review I try to look for bad aspect or atleast some I think are because fanfiction writer not being professional I always think you can give them your opinion so they can do better. But for yours the only negative opinion I could have is “hey your story is too short” which is a hypocrite one, objectively the length is perfect.
Well I could go on and on for long but I will leave you here. I’m going to read all of your works see if i can have more of Hazel James around and try to finally understand what happened! Thank you for your story and cya soon!
Sorry for all the grammatical or other spelling mistakes when I review on iPad it’s fucked up and I can’t see what I’m writing...
| sydneysages chapter 13 . 12/3/2017
Oh man I hadn't actually read this chapter, which is bad, but oh my god, I'm glad i didn't because this is a traumatic cliffhanger. James is going to have to use magic, I assume, but man.
I love that James is on the team, and I love the cute little gang trip to Brighton, but of course nothing could be simple, so let's just hope that Dylan is fine and James saves him and the gang either accept his magic or he has to obliviate them all (or he gets his aunt involved and she decides that the use of magic was acceptable due to the fact that he saved a life, and he gets let off).
Update soon xoxo
| Guest chapter 13 . 11/30/2017
| Guest chapter 13 . 11/26/2017
Literal cliff hanger! Can’t wait for the next update