|Reviews for Death has no Master, but Life has Servants|
| SamIthuriel chapter 10 . 11/16
Fanfiction writers are real writers. Keep it up and the haters can go” duck their bamn ditch fass”.
You’ll have to read between the lines on that last statement.
| f1nster chapter 1 . 10/26
lol, accidentally posted this on your other story so I'll copy and paste it here: "Love this story. Absolute shame it hasn't been continued. You have a gem here. Would be a shame to throw it away." Seriously. Really into this. Many would enjoy you returning to this story.
| alsdjhfgljkwebgh chapter 12 . 8/15
"we go on"
Unless the author is too stupid to continue a story
| guestinator chapter 12 . 7/20
Oh, so now despite the earlier chapter having her tell Harry there was a pH so precious balance and it is why he couldn't interfere and save lives his wand... She is now saying she brought him here to save the world?
It is annoying when the author doesn't bother to reread their own work and so things get crossed like that. Let me give you some advice as one writer to another - reread your entire work each time you start to write a new chapter .
Is it a pain? Yes but if you don't have that determination to do even that and you don't enjoy reading your own work you shouldn't be writing in my opinion.
| guestinator chapter 8 . 7/20
It is a fucking worthless copout used by writers that can't think of an actual reason to have powerful people solve issues. There has even been multiple people with degrees of all kinds point out how worthless that sort of statement is.
In the end? I am sure you not acting for the so called Greater Good will be a solvent in the weeping wounds of the abused the world over for all time.
Oh... It doesn't? Well how about that! It is weak writing and fpe the MC them being lazy and or cowards in that they can't even admit to themselves they just don't feel like it or refuse to be able to deal with being the choice maker instead of others.
That is what grates the most. Others do it far worse yet they are fine... You do it with far more power? Nooooooo! Too strong! Not fair! Bitch whine moaaaan!
| guestinator chapter 5 . 7/20
Yep, no thought on those issues at all. So either he doesn't understand because he is stupid or Oberon vastly blew things out of proportions along with everyone elses thoughts we see in it.
Which is it? He is stupid here? Who is not realizing reality?
| guestinator chapter 4 . 7/20
I'll just point out Harry shouile realize he can't count on them now. They could have helped him a great deal even outside of men and ships but didn't.
If no thoughts are on that then he is stupid. Even worse if he forgives them or doesn't even realize he had been slighted as he has and cast out.
| Figggle chapter 1 . 6/27
It really is concerning how many authors don't seem to realise that renaming him as Hadrian is pure cringe, made even worse by the fact there is no reason for it, you kill your own stories with that nonsense.
| FlashSonic7 chapter 12 . 6/16
This was GREAT and I can't wait for more!
| KagetsukiVII chapter 12 . 6/13
Great story, cant wait for update
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/22
I love this story bro so much fuckin amazing hope you update it
| LiveFreeDieWell chapter 1 . 4/17
I've probably read this a dozen times already, but here I am again. I love it and am so sad that it was never finished.
| picking-up-story-from-abadoned chapter 1 . 3/25
| Makimass chapter 8 . 3/9
The first 7 chapters were great but this is where I stop reading, this chapter made me lose my respect for harry as a character..
He was pathetic during this chapter..
| DarkChampion chapter 6 . 1/23
Got some of that Mad Dog in him.