Very interesting chapter! I can't wait for the continuation :D but there is a lot of unanswered questions...how does Harry's magic work in this world? Is it normal to have magic? How powerful is he? Only the people of Dorne knows about his magic or his brothers also know about it? I always love your stories (this one has a lot to live up to, since "Reap My Fury " was amazing, and I'm still hoping you will continue it) so, I'm curious to know why making Harry the second brother of the king was more important than just keeping him the son of Stannis ... or that is not the reason why you changed the story plot? I have so many questions! Update soon please :3

I like this new one. I think having Harry in Dorne is going to be interesting and being the brother of Robert, Stannis, and Renly instead of the son is an interesting idea. Could you give us the ages you are going with here of some of your major characters; Harry, Arianne, Oberyn, Robert, Stannis, Renly. You get the idea. I think it will help with the understanding of the characters and the story. Also I have to wonder who his two wives were, from the descriptions I would say Susan Bones but the other I am torn with because I would think Hermione but it could be someone else. I think that your character of Harry here is very interesting and one I will look forward to reading.

Please update soon and good luck.

Great start. Please update soon!

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I like it! Something different than anything else I've seen which is #awesomesauce

Make sure to make your chapters bigger.

Oh and publish new chapters daily.

Hahaha! I like this.