Ahhh, I see now. The Naruto bashing and is you can write the usual tropes associated with his character for Sakura instead. Juvenile writing logic. You shouldn't have to invalidate one character to uplift another.

Oh wow, never saw that coming. /sarcasm
I like this story. But I hate how you wrote Naruto.

"Screams into Author Note" You want to give Orochimaru a redemption but not Team 7?! What the absolute fuck. If that happens, I'm out of this mess. No matter how good it's been, if you make Sakura like Orochimaru after her parent's... lord.

The ending right here is the problem. She labels Naruto as insensitive while not bothering to think about the reason for his lack of social awareness, but has no problems talking to Gaara and trying to help him.

Sakura's dislike for Naruto really needs to be explained. Reading this story in one sitting, it makes no damn sense. One moment, you had her wanting to be friendly with him, and then she pretty much dislikes him. But you don't show why! It seems more juvenile without proper explanation. She can stand being around the other people who graduates from her year, but Naruto prescence irks her? She hasn't even attempted to have a legit conversation with him to address anything. The Team 7 hate borders on bashing if not properly developed in the story. And while Sasuke is understandable. Every time Kakashi and Naruto have a resolution moment with Sakura, you completely invalidate it on their next interaction.

Sigh, okay, minus the canon main character bashing, this story is really good.

This story has had really amazing character development. Greatly enjoying it!

Okay, I retract my earlier review!

Why does she keep lumping Naruto in with Sasuke and Kakashi? It's a bit annoying and hopefully will be resolved or at least explained through the story.

fuck. I've been following this story for YEARS. waiting... took a break from reading FF altogether. MY HEART! I love what you did with it. THANK YOU FOR FINISHING IT!

Moment of silence before applause breaks out. Bravo. Thanks for an amazing story, and taking the time to work it out and finish it! I'm gonna miss it but really am happy to have been able to read it.

I love this story. I read it time and time again. So it is wonderful and sad to see it finished.
Thank you for this beautiful masterpiece.

absolutely amazing story! great job on it

She said it! She said the name of the fic

Whoever said good things must come to an end is a f*cking liar.
Anyway...I quite enjoyed this ending, and am sad to see you go from here, but I'll probably come along and see what else you get up your sleeve on Archive lol.
Urghhh I have a lot of emotions