The holocaust started btw because every single place and country in the history of mankind was better off WITHOUT Jews. 107 times they got evicted, and there are very good reasons for that.

A'ight. I appreciate this new take and I like how things develop, but, by Celestia's wings, this is taking forever. I could get behind it if it wasn't hour-by-hours recount of few year worth of story. Too slow, I'm out.
PS Pairing Hr to the ginger menace was a low blow, especially when you spoil pairing about 300k words before they happen.

Meh. So that Alan is secretly a blood thirsty maniac who has a crush on Hermione? Obviously she would find out after it backfires and he would try to justify it to her. That's... Very two-dimensional for character.

Nice take. Mudblood Resistance Front is a nice name.

amazing story.
i was rivited the whole way through. i think your world building was great, your political commentary fabulous and your development of muggle/magic tactics was sublime.

my only 2 criticisms was i felt the battle in Jamacia was quite drawn out and took a chapter too long, but admittedly i felt the sense of relief when they escape. secondly, i felt the relationship between Ginny and Harry was a bit rushed and forced, it seemed that he and Luna had more natural chemistry?

Id love to know more of your motivations and inspiration for this story. Obviously the Nazi persecution of the jews was a large part of the premise but i felt that potentially The Troubles and the Palestine-Isreal conflict could be overlayed as well?

great story. will 100% read again!

Thank you for your contribution to the world of Harry Potter Fan Fiction.

I really don't like how easily 15 year olds talk about killing people, innocent or not (and at several moments they are even smiling) as if it were something natural.

I also thought it was terrible how little Harry and Ronald had done so far, as if they didn't add anything to the story.

The only character I like seems to be Dumbledore and even so, I find him very compassionate about the situation.

This story had potential, but so far I've been disappointed.

I really don't like how easily 15 year olds talk about killing people, innocent or not (and at several moments they are even smiling) as if it were something natural.

I also thought it was terrible how little Harry and Ronald had done so far, as if they didn't add anything to the story.

The only character I like seems to be Dumbledore and even so, I find him very compassionate about the situation.

This story had potential, but so far I've been disappointed.

Seamus "knows some people" does he? What people could Seamus, an Irish lad, possibly know that have knowledge of fighting an insurrection? Beats me...

I'd feel bad but many people in that house went way farther then they did in canon I think. And they can't just keep being allowed to bully those who aren't pureblood

I'm really fascinated by this!

...My ability to suspend disbelief is being severely tested right now

Nice start, although it could’ve had some more violence. Malfoy being cut to ribbons an inch at the time for starters…

But I guess that’ll come soon :)

So annoying! Quit shoehorning Dumbledore and Harry in I’d all you have them do is worthless blabbering.

Wow! You really need to read about the Fabians. This is literally right up their ally and what's been slowly going on in our for the last 100 years totally twisting things around. Todays generation is absolutely brain dead.