Reviews for Divided and Entwined
Guest chapter 1 . 8/5
The premise of this story is so very intriguing that I would truly love to read it only... the thought of Hermione with Ron is so violently repulsive that I truly can't bring myself to do it. Bet it's a fantastic story, though.
Guest chapter 49 . 7/24
I could do with a lot less detail on the habits of horny teenagers, but I'm glad you at least had the good taste to fade to black instead of showing us even more things no one needs to see.
Guest chapter 47 . 7/23
"You were told that he was 'near the Mad King's Castle'. That's not exactly helpful."

If you've ever heard of the last kind of Neuschwanstein, it's certainly plenty helpful
Arden chapter 44 . 7/23
One thing that does bother me a bit is the nomenclature, though: *evil* voodoo priests and witch doctors are called bokors. An houngan is a practitioner of "white" magic, as the voodoo faith understands it. Female ones are called mambos, just as an aside. The kind of person who'd cast curses or create zombies, though? Definitely bokor.
Arden chapter 43 . 7/23
This has really been much better than I expected. You're very skilled at character voices. Everyone sounds very convincingly like their canon equivalent.
Arden chapter 12 . 7/21
Interesting take. Not sure I agree with all your characterization choices, but this seems well done so far.
3tim chapter 37 . 7/4
Dumbledore's box of trinkets is probably going to be the biggest deus ex machina.
ArachnidHiveMind chapter 47 . 4/8
Oh please let it be a HarryxLuna story, I have nothing against Hinny, but HarryxLuna is a great pairing
ArachnidHiveMind chapter 35 . 4/7
Luna is so precious! Oh my gosh she is soooooo adorable!
ArachnidHiveMind chapter 34 . 4/7
Yo I just realized, where the fuq is Hagrid?! I was reading the recruitment but, and wondered about the canonical thing where Voldemort recruited the giants and Hagrid was sent to try and stop it. But that didn’t happen year five, and where at the end of year six at this point (I believe)
ArachnidHiveMind chapter 17 . 4/6
Guess who’s screwed? Daphne and Tracy are screwed that’s who!
ArachnidHiveMind chapter 14 . 4/6
…and the nag was killed, woohoo
ArachnidHiveMind chapter 14 . 4/6
Oh thank you for not doing that
ArachnidHiveMind chapter 13 . 4/6
I swear if Hermione decided to get into a relationship to manipulate Allen I’m going to skip a chunk of chapters
ArachnidHiveMind chapter 11 . 4/6
Yes Hermione! Alan‘s a SOB!
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