Reviews for Divided and Entwined
Guest chapter 8 . 11/15
So annoying! Quit shoehorning Dumbledore and Harry in I’d all you have them do is worthless blabbering.
X from Aumsville chapter 1 . 10/22
Wow! You really need to read about the Fabians. This is literally right up their ally and what's been slowly going on in our for the last 100 years totally twisting things around. Todays generation is absolutely brain dead.
Concolor44 chapter 1 . 10/10
Those bigots won't know what hit them.
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 50 . 8/5
What the heck is Rookwood trying to do?
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 48 . 8/5
Rookwood keeps obliviating muggles? They don’t know who he is. Lol. Damn. Daphne giving Theo up to the Order. Cold.
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 44 . 8/5
Can’t wait for her to die. :)
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 43 . 8/5
Aww. Is Snape dead too? Amelia is so dumb. Ugh.
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 40 . 8/4
That was very anticlimactic. Also, where’s Dean? I skipped ahead because it was taking a bit too long.
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 22 . 8/4
Dumbledore, you better know Voldemort is there. And I hope Hermione and the Resistance don’t fall for Brenda’s trick. Can’t believe they’re allowing Unforgivables. Bet nobody can use it at a defense. They’ll just arrest them.
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 21 . 8/4
Draco’s dead! Wow. Suck it. I hope we see McGonagall, Sprout, and Flitwick’s POV. Dumbledore was talking aboyar Pomfrey when he said he knew someone who’d rather be obliviated, but help gear the prisoners. Dumbledore better be prepared. Voldemort is going to attack Hogwarts. I hope Augusta is rescued soon. :)
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 20 . 8/4
Sucks to suck Daphne. I’m glad everyone’s okay. But why did Hermione Accio the bodies clothes and Dennis clothes? Makes so sense unless she wants them naked. Which I don’t think she does. Martin offering to repair the muggles televisions, interesting. Great chapter. :)
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 19 . 8/4
More dates? Hermione, you obviously like Ron more! I hope Albus and Aberforth reconcile. Brenda, Martin, and Parkinson having to live around muggle. Lol. You’re going to have Harry and Voldemort battle in their minds. I’m sorry, but that’s not it. Like wtf? They need to fight. One needs to kill the other. “Battling” the other out of one of the other’s minds isn’t going to anything.
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 18 . 8/4
Damn. They got Avery. I wish Tracey and Daphne hadn’t gotten away but they were dumb enough to get tracked. Losers. Aberforth seems to want Albus to praise him. Deep down he wants to have a brotherly relationship with his brother again. So the Horcruxes are changing. One of them is now just a stone in Gringotts? How did Voldemort even get down there? Great chapter. :)
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 17 . 8/4
Oh shit. So the twins Instant Dryness combined with something works on polyjuice forms and reverses them. Fred and George better be ready with stunner spells! Amelia needs to wake up. God, if it takes Susan getting taken by Death Eaters…. Aberforth is slowly coming around. And who kidnapped Augusta if it wasn’t Kingsley? And Neville has finally seen the light. It only took his grandmother getting kidnapped by Voldemort. Hermione obviously liked the date with Ron better. And why is kinglet apprehensive about the Floo Network? What incident happened? Great chapter. :)
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 16 . 8/4
Um, elves have very powerful magic. They can disapparate even with Anti Disapparation wards up. I’m very confused why you’re changing a lot of the lord that would be important even if this is a fanfic. Making the elves seems less is stupid. They have their own powerful magic that Death Eaters hardly remember about. Hermione definitely likes Ron more. His date was better. Sucks to suck for Draco’s junior Death Eater squad. Getting beaten by the Burrow. Did Kingsley just stupefy Augusta Longbottom?! Great chapter. :)
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