an amazing chapter again violet!

so many cute moments with Harry and Leo ;)

i have to admit, Hermione’s internship made me anxious…

love u, love all ur books, characters, writing, etc.
u r amazing please finish the 5th book

so glad I found this again!
Some very interesting developments have happened

This story somehow keeps getting better and better.
Ill start the next book with the hope that you won’t take years to finish XD

Thank you for writing this and sharing your talent with us all!

Thank you for this story. I have read this series straight through...

In fairness, Harry IS sixteen now, technically. So the age difference isn’t as weird

OMG I read this years ago before this section of the story came out and I am absolutely mind blown. This is amazing. I’m literally trying not to scream rn over the end of the ruse. I can’t believe it’s all finally fallen apart and in oh what a spectacular way.

Finally the ruse ends

Did Ulrich Albright make a Doctor Suess reference? He totally did. He called Rigel thing one. As in Things one and two

So... On my FOURTH solid read through of this series... It has only now occurred to me that Owens and Riddle were probably speaking in PARSELTONGUE! The sly hints at it with descriptive words such as "subtle and soft" were very clever.

Hold up, does Rigel speak French like a house elf speaks English?

Great chapter but I’m confused about something. Why is Rigel suddenly uncomfortable and out-of-place wearing dress robes? Is it just because she had to borrow Draco’s? And the sudden commentary on her boots by people who’ve seen Rigel in formal dress many times, from the Quidditch match in book 1, meeting Rosier and Rookwood for the first time, the Malfoy’s parties, the Ministry Galas… Rigel has to get dressed up all the time and now suddenly it’s like she’s uncomfortable with it.

I love your stories and have re-read them more than I am willing to admit. I just noticed a slight inconsistency in this chapter. Hermione went first in the obstacle course, not Owens bit after the task they are talking like he went first.

Literally legendary story. Can’t wait to see what happens next.

I've finished my second read of this series a few months ago. It is by far my favourite fanfiction, and this is my favourite chapter, so I thought I'd leave my first review ever... After keeping the ruse intact for four books, the reveal in this chapter is SO satisfying. The switching points of view in this chapter are masterfully done. So many goosebump moments... Sirius slowly losing control, the evil gang revealing the ruse, Harry's heartbreaking confrontation with Draco... I can safely say that no piece of fiction has ever made me so excited. Well done.

I love this book. It means more to me than I could probably ever put into words. Thank you.