Reviews for The Futile Facade |
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Pleased Reader chapter 1 . 4/23/2016 Whaaaaaaaaat? This was AMAZING! Actually, AMAAAAAAAAZING, that's more like it. :) And it came sooner than the one month mark so you're golden! Thanks for the update - it's a grand story and I love it! |
The Other World chapter 1 . 4/23/2016 Heyy An amazingly long update! I was so excited to see the notification and you definitely didn't disappoint. I'm going to assume that the futile in the title didn't mean the secret will be revealed this year because it's way too soon! Love the way you're handing Rigel's recovery btw and her friendship with Leo never fails to make me smile. The dominion jewel is aggravating and I feel sorry for rigel to have to feel with it, but it must be a great plot device and I have a feeling you're going to involve it later. The length of your update was great and please keep the chapters coming. This is seriously my favourite fanfiction and I'm something of a veteran so that's saying something. Thank you so much! xx |
charliepotter13 chapter 1 . 4/23/2016 Keen! So keen to see where this story goes! Great start :) |
astralandcelestial chapter 1 . 4/23/2016 Welcome back and thank you soooo much for this amazing first chapter! to be honest, you are one of the few authors I have ever read whose stories are not just fanfictions but books in their own right! It's such a shame that not everyone knows of your beautiful writing. I'm really enjoying all the subtle machinations going on in the background~ I have a strong belief that Chekhov's Gun is coming into play, especially with Burke's request for those potions and Krait's suddenly loose lips. I wonder who those potions are going to be sold to. on the other hand, I feel that you did a marvelous job in displaying Harry's trauma. Obviously, it was a horrifying experience; her PTSD is nicely visible but, as she seems to be wont to do, Harry is also trying to hide that. I also enjoy how you managed to work the Jewel back into the story; I wonder what's going to continue happening. Stupid Jewel. Is Harry not able to restrict its power by adding more commands to the construct? What about flooding it with her /will/ rather than giving it magic and compelling it to use the magic only by the will infused within it? anyways, looking forward to your next chapter. Thank you so much for your inspirational writing! Stay awesome and keep rocking. Good luck! We have faith and confidence in you! And we'll always be here for you, patiently waiting (read: chomping at the bits but knowing that it'll be worth it in the end XP) Lots of love and admiration and gratitude, ~A Faithful Follower |
Lushie99 chapter 1 . 4/23/2016 Thank you soooko much Violet I loved the chapter, Harry, Draco, Leo and even the Jewel! I'm glad Harry's magic is free again, but I'm VERY WORRIED about the Jewel knowing Harry and Archie's secret... I can't wait for your take on the triwizard tournament, you are one of the best writers I know, and you'll be brilliant as always Cheers! |
Evani chapter 1 . 4/23/2016 Oh gods YES I am soooo99ooo9 happy for this update, it makes me giddy. I can't wait for your version of the tournament, its bound to be as riveting as always. Harry really needs to tell Leo, he's too plush not to know. Probably doesn't help that I ship them harder than I really should xD thank you so very much for writing this as always, I want more xD |
Queen of Smoke and Mirrors chapter 1 . 4/23/2016 oh, and I do hope we'll be seeing much more of draco! maybe even... some drarry? pleeease? |
SlightlySociopathic chapter 1 . 4/23/2016 Oh god I am so! Excited! For this book! AAAHAAHAHAAHHHHH. |
MirrorOfTheLost chapter 1 . 4/23/2016 Thank you for such a quick update! Best thing to wake up to, ever! |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/23/2016 I really didn't expect you to post this chapter to quickly, but I'm really glad you did. I really want to see what this new year brings. |
Queen of Smoke and Mirrors chapter 1 . 4/23/2016 I'm so excited! You write so well |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/23/2016 So happy to see that u r continuing! I love this fic so much keep up the awesome work! |
MLsage chapter 1 . 4/23/2016 I squealed like a little girl when I got the notification e-mail that your next story was up! I am SO excited. Huge fan of your series. Okay, time to go read it now. Keep doing what you're doing! |