Reviews for Amalgum – Lockhart's Folly |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I don’t know if you’re still active here but this remains one of my all time favorites and I have come back to reread it many times. Thank you for the great story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this story! Thanks so much for writing it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() 'Age of consent is 11' 'create amulets that let potential 17 year olds see 11 year olds naked' Really showing your creepy predilections here, Jesus Christ. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i want this story, but slightly more mature. good read though, i'm gonna give it another go. |
![]() ![]() ![]() God it is alwasy cringe the multiple Lordships and the forced harem stuff. You do realise in situations like this with a noble inheriting multiple titles they dont need to marry multiple people they can merge the houses, only represent one until a descendent desides to inherit it, and finally the most obvious have multiple children and have wach inherit a title… |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have always liked this story but the one thing tht always frustrated me is how yku would just make things up without giving any depth behind it like making the accio charm be able to summon anything thats not how it would work you need to know exactly why you want to summon because how would it know what to do otherwise, or what about the horcrux there was no investigation to figure out how to get rid of a horcrux it just happens |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's good fun and a fine premise. Making Lockheart competent without loosing his style is great. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It could have turned out well, but the author does not know what dialogues are, all communication takes place through the monologue of one character and the silence of another. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story. Extra kudos. |
![]() ![]() "So mote it be" Ughh, can't believe you included that |
![]() ![]() Thank you! I really enjoyed this. I got a bit of the ick with Lockhart saying all students are fair game and McGonnagals romp with a former student. Like always Ick-student teacher dynamic. But also understand Lockhart was “icky” and parts of that “icky” can’t be left out in the character split between a noble and battle hardened Harry and a limelight craving lier. But I liked the way you explored some of that through magic adjustments and the whole story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the story, thank you for sharing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, that’s a clever end. This is remarkable, Harry has never been portrayed so clever before. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You'd think I would get tired of Gilderoy listing off his titles multiple times during a conversation, but I'll be damned if I don't crack up every time he goes through his growing list of titles. Well done. |