***WHERE IS THE SEQUEL, OP?***

Seriously, though... it's... it's beautiful. I love it - like... so much.

Hell, I think I might lovingly borrow some of your Neo characterization for myself once I bring myself to start writing RWBY stuff. This is wonderful.

This was such a great story, I loved every second of it and only wish it kept going on but I guess I'm still just happy I could just read it anyway.

Thank you.

PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY!

I think it would be a bit better if it was Raven watching over Yang. Just a bit confused as to why Qrow would be watching over them vs watching over Ruby and RNJR.

I think Qrow is the only one to really call Yang ‘firecracker’. But even with these minor... bumps in the lore, it’s still pretty good so far.

So I just finished this now and I love this story you got them down so well that I wish this actually happened in the show. Please continue this story I wish you luck and keep up the good work

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ok so I just finished reading the last chapter, my opinion; it’s a very cool fanfiction, not too short, a little long and repetitive on the end, a little "love power" also but cool, read it -

I hope you continue the story of Neo and Yangs journey. I want see what happens when they find WBY and JNR also their reactions, they may have mixed feelings about Neo’s presences. I have a feeling Yang will argue about how they just left her and how she was dead inside until Neo had saved her. I also hope that in the future Yang will eventually get the arm she original had in volume 6.

Well that resolution felt rushed.

WELP, Congratulations to youthis amazing story has now converted me to a Baked Alaska shipper

that never will happen

Love this story! I don't ship Neo and Yang, but this story is freaking amazing! I love that you got their personality down and put reason behind their actions, especially Neo's. Neo is my favourite villain and after volume 3, we never got to see any of her so thank you for doing her justice.

its almost 3am
i stood up all night to read this story and it was well worth it!

such a great story, carried solely by yang and neo (with some help) and it all just worked out so well! props to you, i enjoyed every word!

that chapter ending is pure perfection bravo
baked alaska is one of my favorite rwby ships, one of my first too. i've never taken enough time to look for fics for various reasons but i can already tell i'm really gonna like this one! so far its been a really great read and i can't wait to see where it goes