Reviews for Burning Coals
JustMonikammmmmmmmmm chapter 22 . 10/2/2020
***WHERE IS THE SEQUEL, OP?***

Seriously, though... it's... it's beautiful. I love it - like... so much.

Hell, I think I might lovingly borrow some of your Neo characterization for myself once I bring myself to start writing RWBY stuff. This is wonderful.
Suicidal Nobody chapter 22 . 7/26/2020
This was such a great story, I loved every second of it and only wish it kept going on but I guess I'm still just happy I could just read it anyway.

Thank you.
Firestar001 chapter 22 . 7/5/2020
PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY!
Firestar001 chapter 9 . 7/4/2020
I think it would be a bit better if it was Raven watching over Yang. Just a bit confused as to why Qrow would be watching over them vs watching over Ruby and RNJR.
Firestar001 chapter 5 . 7/4/2020
I think Qrow is the only one to really call Yang ‘firecracker’. But even with these minor... bumps in the lore, it’s still pretty good so far.
Awarded chapter 22 . 5/16/2020
So I just finished this now and I love this story you got them down so well that I wish this actually happened in the show. Please continue this story I wish you luck and keep up the good work
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeee chapter 1 . 4/15/2020
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Bysemilah chapter 22 . 1/4/2020
ok so I just finished reading the last chapter, my opinion; it’s a very cool fanfiction, not too short, a little long and repetitive on the end, a little "love power" also but cool, read it -
Guest121 chapter 1 . 12/1/2019
I hope you continue the story of Neo and Yangs journey. I want see what happens when they find WBY and JNR also their reactions, they may have mixed feelings about Neo’s presences. I have a feeling Yang will argue about how they just left her and how she was dead inside until Neo had saved her. I also hope that in the future Yang will eventually get the arm she original had in volume 6.
Guest chapter 17 . 7/20/2019
Well that resolution felt rushed.
IrvingZissman chapter 22 . 9/1/2018
WELP, Congratulations to youthis amazing story has now converted me to a Baked Alaska shipper
Dovahkiin795 chapter 22 . 2/24/2018
that never will happen
WhisperingRoseKnight chapter 22 . 2/17/2018
Love this story! I don't ship Neo and Yang, but this story is freaking amazing! I love that you got their personality down and put reason behind their actions, especially Neo's. Neo is my favourite villain and after volume 3, we never got to see any of her so thank you for doing her justice.
Eienias20 chapter 22 . 2/10/2018
its almost 3am
i stood up all night to read this story and it was well worth it!

such a great story, carried solely by yang and neo (with some help) and it all just worked out so well! props to you, i enjoyed every word!
Eienias20 chapter 4 . 2/10/2018
that chapter ending is pure perfection bravo
baked alaska is one of my favorite rwby ships, one of my first too. i've never taken enough time to look for fics for various reasons but i can already tell i'm really gonna like this one! so far its been a really great read and i can't wait to see where it goes
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