Reviews for Shattered Sight
Guest chapter 1 . 12/18/2016
That was cute
RepeatingSimplePhrases chapter 1 . 6/20/2016
Awwww!
Sup Yo chapter 1 . 5/14/2016
Sorry, wrong button. You know how to dig deeper when you need to and really tug at people's emotions! Keep doing what you do!
Sup Yo chapter 1 . 5/14/2016
Hi! Great story! Only things I found are-the "I" is not capitalized when Kendra says,"because I'm your cousin." There should also be a line break between "fingering her silver braclet " and the next part of the story. Your writing is great with much attention to detail and high intensity action followed by a calmer part. That is awesome! I really appreciate that it is not just intense all the way through. You have a talent and I'm glad you share it. You know how to pull people's attention and dig deep
Guest chapter 1 . 5/3/2016
Great story really well written
FablehavenFan chapter 1 . 5/4/2016
So far so good. Keep it up!
Cosplaygirl2002 chapter 1 . 5/1/2016
THIS IS SO CUTE THEY ARE LITERALLY MY BROTP YASSSSSS
Keep doing what ya do
Cosplaygirl2002