thank you for a wonderful story!

Hey! its me again, 2025 now, huh? Its been a year since i commented!-Not really?-Happy New Year!

-Hehe told you I'd come back!-

Im still waiting for this to update, and my review back then still stands. Nakamaship foreverrrr!

Still no update, im a bit disappointed.. But hey! I'll still be waiting for it! I'll come back in the future, and in thats future's future and so on!

Sending Love!

ألن تكمل القصة ؟

Update please

Where can I read the rest of this? It only goes up to chapter 14.

Hey Author-san!

i hope.. really, really, really. hope that you come back,and continue this story! Its really amazing,the plot and everything! I see that the last You update was around 2021? and today is already 2024! How time passes by so slow and fast at the same time,huh?

But, really though,i hope you continue this,and not drop/discontinue it! You see,-haha dhar man reference,get it?-your fanfic is one of the best i have so far found. Most of the fanfic i found are dropped.. or discontinued.. or forgotten.. etc,But! i DO NOT blame the authors at all if they do! i mean,they got life outside too, don't they? I guess I'd become super sad if i found out they hadn't updated for years..!

Kinda went off topic?,but meh its finee~

Also,i really hope that you won't include any romance at all! for me personally,i think it'd just ruin the vibe and everything.. I'd like to think they're one big happy family(?). Luffy, I really think he just shouldn't end up with anyone. Zoro..i feel like he'd look up to Kuina? and nothing else. Makino amd Shanks.. is cute i guess,but everything should be nakamaship!

Ah but of course,that is just my opinion, Author-san. I will come back and see if this has updated again in the future,and that future's future,and so on.

-Yours truly,a fan.

天啊，真的是太好看了！！我真的很期待它的繼續進行我希望我能夠等到你的更新，不論如何我都會繼續等待並重複閱讀這部作品，我迫不及待地想要看到接下來的內容！你的更新永遠會擁有我我會毫不猶豫地重複閱讀它3

It saddens me that theres a possibility that you’ll never continue this one, its so good! I’ll wait if theres an update for it I’ll definitely jump to read it. I really like that you dont plan on doing romance between the main cast(absolutely no hate for those who like that) it just feels more accurate to the orginal cast. It’s so so wholesome and I just like this one alot.

Pretty good

I love,love,love,loooovvveeeee this fanfic!️️.
Do please continue,there aren't really many fanfics that are this good,so far only found 3(yours included),hahah.I love how op Luffy is in this one,and how overprotective he is on his nakama. And omggg! The law and Bepo brother addition is soooo cute man.I love the way law and ace argue,kinda like Sanji and Zoro.

There are also many fanfics that are really good,but are not finished, usually the 'good ones' I read were only around 3-4 chapters,and we're really short,and was last updated on years that I'm complaining, having ideas and thinking how the plot will go is really hard,so I hope you don't drop this fanfic! I look forward for future updates!

(And I do agree on a review that I read,about not having romance between the nakama,since I like these kinds of stories without . Makimo and Shanks is cute,but please,please not general romance in anything else . I'd like to think they are just a big family(?). Like the strawhats, they're just very close, nothing more, nothing less. I also feel like zoro thinks kuina as his idol or .)

Overall this fanfiction is GREAT !

I love this fic! Love the story line, love the relationship between them especially the brothers! (Law and Bepo in addition?! OMG! I LOVE IT) (Ace and Law's bickering is gold! Never imagined that before!) and Dad-Corazon is so precious!

The characteristics especially Luffy's is so gooooood (cause I saw one comment said they didn't like Luffy act, they want Luffy to be different cause of time travel, I was like wtf? If Luffy act different he won't be Luffy at all! He is just another entirely different person using Luffy name like most other fanfic!) That’s why I love the way you write Luffy cause you didn't make Luffy ooc and he's just so Luffy! His entire personality is the thing that make me love him so much! So thank you!

(Plsplspls make no romance plzzz keep it platonic especially between the brothers and nakama. I don't like romance even the subtle romantic act between Makino and Shanks make me ick, not against them but I just don't like romance in general and your story is so good, I don't want to drop this bc of romance)

This was great.
Thank you!

Bwahahahaha! Team Drowners! HA! HILARIOUS

Please come back and update! This story is so fun and I wanna see all the changes Luffy will make. PLEASE!

This story has been amazing. And I love it to bits. I know it's not finished but that is ok. You provided enough to where I can think of a million different scenarios and what ifs of the this alternate universe you created. Thank you.

ahhhhh, this fic is really good, im really sad theres not more of it... it so perfectly captures the characters, and what luffy might become...