|Reviews for Limbo|
| Susie Thornton chapter 1 . 8/11/2016
Thanks...wish the writers would take this and run-
| Yvonne Davila chapter 1 . 5/6/2016
Beautiful and insightful. Well written! Thank you for this gift.
| Patricia Myers chapter 1 . 5/3/2016
Enjoyed very much! Thank you! Look forward to your next writing. You have done great here! Look forward to your next chapters!
| Iloveyourfreckles chapter 1 . 5/4/2016
Nice and sweet one.
I like the way you make him think and react , to see things "in his eyes" when he was unconscious.
| Yvonne Davila chapter 1 . 4/29/2016
Whawho! Wonderful premise, excellent writing. More please.
| Dora Papadamou chapter 1 . 4/28/2016
Beautiful, smooth, flowing but not superfluous... very moving...
| LisaaNY chapter 1 . 4/28/2016
| WriterMelanie chapter 1 . 4/28/2016
Wonderfully written! Keep up the good work - looking forward to more. Perhaps his thoughts during Lee and Rosemary's wedding?
| heartie91 chapter 1 . 4/28/2016
loved this! very powerful... im glad E was able to show J and everyone just how strong is really is... she has come along way since her move to the West...
| RebekahWrites chapter 1 . 4/28/2016
Beautiful! I loved every word! You capture their feelings wonderfully!