|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Last Chance
| Wantaknow chapter 17 . 3h
it would not be revenge to kick everyone out but harry and hermione frfom his god fathers home. but you are a sick fuck
| Wantaknow chapter 17 . 3h
kick them out of the fucking house... i guess you think rape is ok and yes she was raped god i hate fucking writers like you. with out a brain. the dog father could kick everyone out of his house he is realy helping harry. you are a sick fuck and hope your computer crash and blocks
| Wantaknow chapter 15 . 4h
this is got to be the dumbest fucking harry the knows the future oh and now hermione can be raped by the sick fuck ron you are a fucking sick FUCK a sick fuck in deep oh not sex but kissed maybe fingered you sic k fuck you wrote ron to be evil so if harry and the raped hermione get back together are you going to kill the ones that did the evil? no you wont because your a SICK FUCK
| Guest chapter 12 . 18h
bullshit the minister is voted for he is not all powerfull your story makes no sense. they could arest the minester for treason. how old are you for fuck of a dumb shit
| Guest chapter 11 . 18h
hey i know lets not write a story that makes sense
he died 12 times and now hes in the grave yard for the 13th
time and he new about it why didnt he call for his broom and fly to the cup?
harry is the dumb fuck wizard. ron would have done better.
dumbfuckdore must be but fucking harry so many times he has brain damage.
| Wantaknow chapter 8 . 22h
harry is fucking stupid i hope hermione dumps his ass if he is this clueless at what 19 years old and being told hermione is his other half. yeah hes 6 cans short of a six pack, i know he still thinks ginny is the girl even though he was told hed never kissed his solemate... i hope voldy kills the fucker and herimone fuckes him on harry grave... or maybe you could write some smarts into him
| exitus.ravenblade chapter 20 . 3/2
The main difference between tryouts in this story and the ones Harry missed in 5th year canon is that in canon MacLaggen was in the hospital wing after eating doxie eggs for a bet rather than attending tryouts so Ron got the spot almost by default.
| Saissa chapter 25 . 3/1
So that is why Dumbles did nothing?
He WANTED Harry to die?
That is BARBARIC!
I officially declare that Dumbles is also a DARK LORD
| Saissa chapter 21 . 3/1
Dumbledore has shown that he is perfectly ok with telling lies!
Probably because it is "For the Greater Good"
How many people have died because he told them a pack of lies?
James and Lily for sure!
| Pockner chapter 26 . 2/26
Poor Ginny! noooo!
| Pockner chapter 21 . 2/24
instead of saying what Harry and Hermione did in an author's note, you could have just said it in the story...
| Pockner chapter 18 . 2/23
This might be the best version of the Weasley/ potions subplot I've ever read
| Simianpower chapter 10 . 2/9
This is so stations-of-canon that I'm not sure if it's worth continuing. The only notable changes are Harry handling Rita and dating Hermione, and Ron and Crum being bigger dicks than in the book. The rest is nearly identical to canon. Harry even feels like a 14-year-old, not a war hero. His magic is little better than it was the first time. He refusrs to do anything differently. What's the point of this story? Time travel with this few changes is a waste of so many opportunities both for characters and authors.
| Jaycen chapter 17 . 2/3
See, the only thing that bothers me about stories like this is how unrealistic it is to think someone who has been through that many life and death circumstances, especially constantly since his personality really started to evolve, would just allow people to get off completely with essentially trying to physically rape, and literally have, mind raped his girlfriend and attempting line-thieving through him. I don't see why they are even still at this house? Why is he even talking to these people when they are doing things that are in line, or worse, than what the death eaters have at this point? Why are they not back with the Grangers the moment she was ok? He is able to be someone who can overcome and face literal terror and death multiple times but can't immediately figure out that his girlfriend is clearly under a spell or something when she's suddenly making out with someone she loathes, after he already KNOWS she's been poisoned and kidnapped?
It's a great story, don't get me wrong, but from a strictly personal point of view, it is frustrating at times. He can donate 4 million Galleons to the ministry, irregardless that its the Auror part of it, a ministry that is actively full of death eaters and after him in the daily prophet, and he KNOWS that, but he doesn't think buy a safe house or hire hit wizards or bodyguards with the money instead? I'm up till nearly 4 in the morning reading this, and was killing it up till now, but I don't know if I can look over all that enough to stick with it.
Thank you for taking the time to write the story. It really had me hooked up through chapter 15 and I hope you continue on. I'm sure a lot of people can get into it because it really was good, and I'm sure it probably ends awesome too. Thanks again.
| Wolverine442 chapter 15 . 1/30
God. Can Harry possibly get more thick?! He knew she got chocolate and was worried that it was portioned while he was at grangers house? How could he possibly even entertain the thought that Hermione would be dripping off Ron? Sorry this chapter was nonsensical