Reviews for Harry Potter and the Last Chance |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Unbidden, a green flash of light entered the infirmary and solidified around Harry's ring finger, taking the shape of a glowing green ring. "Harry James Potter" spoke a computerized voice from the ring "You have shown great bravery and willpower in the face of overwhelming odds. Welcome to the GREEN LANTERN CORPS." |
![]() ![]() ![]() What, no Ron going full fanboy for Krum?! … Krum is a perfectly reasonable popular figure for the redheaded gloryhound leech to glom onto. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It has been nearly 5 years since I first read this story. This is not a story for teens. It earned its M rating in gore and such evil characters. I need to go read something fluffy now, but I did enjoy the reread of your story! |
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![]() ![]() I have read this fic at least 20 times bc I love it so much but I'm finally gonna complain. You had Sirius blame Hermione for what happened and that's not ok. Yes, he let her off but he threatened her when her first offense was potion induced. I get the sentiment but I'm not ok with that. She was more of a victim then Harry was. Sirius holding that against her was shit. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The story works better with Charlus and Dorea as his grandparents! Also, I like stories better when Harry destroys the “fake” friend and most of that family! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just came back for a re-read and this fic is even better than I remembered. It's so good! I loved every minute. Thanks so much for writing and sharing it with us! |
![]() ![]() Ok, so Harry after running away from V' whole year and losing people like his godfather made him a supersoldier who can battle Dumbledore and Moody and the entire Order if needed. Cool. |
![]() ![]() Um. Did he leave the Stone on the floor of the manor? |
![]() ![]() Ouch. Sirius's threat sounds very dangerous in a world of magic where words might gave un-thought-of consequences. He promised, in a bout of overprotection of his godson, that, under given circumstances, he would 'destroy what makes Hermione's life worth living,' aka, he promised to kill Harry. And he's a thoughtless Griffindor whose attitude had already cost him twelve years in Azkaban and his mental stability got only worse since. |
![]() ![]() Wonderful chapter. Kinda sad towards the end. |
![]() ![]() This chapter's highest is Harry giving that 'you are useless' speech, looking down clearly from his 17-year-old self's eyes but with the temperament of a boiling teenager. Yes he knows much he logically shouldn't (unless you count being killed a dozen times already, plus consequences) but I want to see his face when the time of the Battle of Hogwarts comes and he suddenly knows nothing new info because he'd been dead at that point. |
![]() ![]() I love the 'everybody home' montage, especially Draco :) |
![]() ![]() Waste to destroy the cabinets rather than keep them to make use of himself. Or let them be used so he knows they're coming and setup a trap like blowing a whole hallway up and getting the group. Now he's clueless and doesn't have the link in his head to even attempt rooting out info. |
![]() ![]() Considering Sirius spent his 20's in Azkaban the old comments are severely distasteful. |