Reallyenjoyed it.

I just enjoyed another read of this fic. Thank you for writing.

when you say a Hufflepuff getting harry from Moody's class you say first year in one line and then say second year right underneath that

Thoroughly enjoyed. Thank you.

Great story, and well written and proofed (well done UrsaMinor. I really enjoyed your take on the Tournament and how you handled 5th year. Reading this story made me realize how much I enjoy when nicknames/titles that are first said in jest become a staple, so I really enjoyed the My Lady/My Champion pet names and of course Professor Potter. Well done overall and thanks for sharing!

this is a wonderful story... the only thing missing from it was Neville being thrust into the background. Luna and Neville were the best of the entire crew in every imaginable way. maybe you can write a new story with the same premise with a more present and active Neville to pair up with Luna? that would be awesome!

Good job.

Why even bother with the work? He already knows it’s useless. And it certainly means nothing to step on McGonagalls toes considering canonically she let him be bullied and never helped. What could she do? Stare disapprovingly? No need to force a respected mentor role for no reason.

Eh, as per usual good chapter, good story and annoying reminder why the sacrifice yourself for your lover/loved one in a fight is fucking stupid. But good over all...

different kind of m rating i had in mind, but still good writing of it

Okay, having finally finished the story, I must say that aside from my hangup on the name Ephialtes, I must admit and say that this story lived up to my expectations very well, and it ended on a fairly high note. One thing I do wish though, was that it didn't end with Harry telling Hermione about his previous life, as I would have loved to have seen both the whole discussion on that and Hermione's reaction to it, which I didn't see in the story nor if I am not mistaken did I see it in the deleted scene story although I haven't taken a very close look at that yet...

Overall, I'll just say that the story as I mentioned, is a very good story, and well worth reading in my opinion, so if you are into this type of challenge story with this particular challenge in particular then I would definitely recommend it, because it is more or less fully completed and labeled as such if you go to download it on a site like fichub...

The story is definitely worth the favorite I am going to give it, and I wish you health happiness and good luck in writing other Harry Potter or other very genres of stories on fanfiction

Okay... I had to stop reading this story to write this review, but rest assured I'll resume reading this AFTER I'm done here...

On to the reason I decided to not finish the chapter before I reviewed and to answer the curiosity I had (and maybe I'm not the only one who knows their stuff) did you write this BEFORE or AFTER the movie 300 came out or failing that, before or after you watched it? Seriously, who names "death" well, one of them anyways, Ephialtes? Now, I'm assuming it's a coincidence that that death's name, is the same name, or similar, as the little person who betrayed his countrymen to"king"(using the term loosely I'd imagine) Xerxes, in the movie 300, and while I doubt that most people would remember that tidbit, or even care, (which honestly I don't know if I care or not about) it makes one wonder if it was used as a subtle clue as to how the story will progress...(without remembering if I've read this before it's hard to tell if it will or not)

Also, who in their right minds calls their kids Ephialtes? It's almost as bad as a "Boy Named Sue", if you ask me...(and guess where THAT reference came from(it's "a Boy Named Sue" by "johnny Cash" if you wanna know or didn't know))

So far, aside from the name the grim reaper is saddled with though, it seems to be a pretty good story, so I'm going to follow this even though it's completed, and I might favorite the story when I'm done reading it...

Listen for once in your lives. ( not life). I love that
Believing in reincarnation, I could actually use this line. Only my family are all pretty well behaved. So it wouldn't be appropriate.

there is too much writer bias forced through in this story

If being too far along in a magical pregnancy stops you from getting an abortion, I can’t imagine any parents sending their teenagers off to a boarding school without long-lasting birth control already in place! What if you get raped?! Seriously, talk about a nightmare scenario!