| Reviews for Harry Potter and the Last Chance |
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   jkarr chapter 11 . 7/1/2016 this is a nice chapter. |
| Bob-Just-Bob chapter 9 . 7/1/2016 lol you went with the hostage mix-up plot, I must admit it is very silly, I have read it in other fics, and it is always hard to swallow. But you pulled it off nicely, Harry's reaction to it wasn't over the top and honestly it made me laugh, so good chapter haha I was expecting Krum to attack Harry underwater, but I am glad that didn't happen. |
| Bob-Just-Bob chapter 8 . 7/1/2016 Krum was a bit much but all in all a good chapter |
| happylady chapter 11 . 7/1/2016 Great chapter Did Cedric go to the graveyard as well? Until next time Gloria |
| god of all chapter 11 . 7/1/2016 Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon. |
| Bob-Just-Bob chapter 6 . 7/1/2016 I am very glad that Harry is "choosing" his own destiny, and not following a script someone gave him. I wonder if Luna will go to the ball, there might be someone who might try to use her to get closer to Harry :/. Thankfully Ronald is out :D |
| Bob-Just-Bob chapter 4 . 7/1/2016 wow, just... wow |
| Bob-Just-Bob chapter 3 . 7/1/2016 HAHAHA I loved this chapter, Harry showing his slytherin side is always a good thing there are too many awesome things happening in this chapter I can't even mention them all. What a great chapter |
| apAidan chapter 11 . 7/1/2016 Ouch. Just ouch. Body checking the cup and then getting dragged halfway across the island to a graveyard has got to hurt when you land. Excellent story, thus far. Incorporating changes yet not losing the original continuity is always difficult. I'm curious to see exactly how things going forward will pan out once Harry lands in the graveyard. Unconscious. looking forward to the next installment. ap Aidan |
| Bob-Just-Bob chapter 2 . 7/1/2016 Interesting conversation with Dobby, I hope Harry uses his services more than canon |
| Bob-Just-Bob chapter 1 . 7/1/2016 But, why does anyone have to be told, "you are supposed to love person A... go on, Love her." this is why I don't like soul mate stories, the only way a soul mate plot would work is if it was love at first sight, not after 6 years of friendship. Otherwise I am curious where this story will go |
| nurray chapter 3 . 7/1/2016 Loved the "Gobshites" idea. I wish I could buy some myself. |
| Bearmauls chapter 11 . 7/1/2016 Heh, well played to make a prepared Harry still end up disadvantaged going into the graveyard. Wonder if he even still has his wand on him, given that he hit the cup on pure momentum. I do worry that you may have under-powered Harry a bit at the end. There was a whole bit on how he could silent-cast (which should dramatically increase your casting speed, especially if you can also minimize wand movements) but he didn't have time for a shield against a regular stunner? Dunno. I like the idea of a disadvantaged Harry going into the graveyard, just not sure the exact way you did it matches up with Harry's observed skills in terms of casting and reaction time. Still an enjoyable chapter, though :) |
| Vegasman59 chapter 11 . 7/1/2016 Well at the least he got shed of that ugly diadem! Fun stuff! |
| Hytekrednek chapter 10 . 6/29/2016 I'm really liking the story so far and looking forward to what is to come. Keep up the good work and hope to see some updates soon. James |