Reviews for Harry Potter and the Last Chance |
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![]() ![]() ![]() nice update, cute h/hr moments, hope h/hr kiss during the ball, how come luna isn't going to the ball, neville should ask her to go, waiting for more |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm really enjoying your story and look forward to more chapters. I love the Reaper challenge! These are some of my favorite fics to read. Keep up the great work, and thanks so much for writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Next exclusive: How Fudge is trying to murder the Lord of a Noble and Ancient House.. Maybe in place of Hagrids exposure. More please |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great work with the chamber in this chapter. I loved how you did it and all the reaction to the chamber in this chapter. I was thinking of something from the last chapter a/n that may work great for you. You know people loved to see the whole light show from Harry's true loves kiss even if you think it is over the top. Here is something that would work. Have Luna see Harry give Herm her first Ture kiss at the end of the ball. Then have him hear her describing it so someone. The thing is if she describes it will all the lights and animals blessing them no one will know if it is just something she see's and no one else can or did it realy happen and Harry and Herm where just to lost in the kiss. This would make both sides happy as it could be or it could just be Luna is Luna lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() it is nice that things seem to be going well for Harry and Hermione. it is also nice that Sirius and Dobby are getting along okay |
![]() ![]() ![]() great chapter! really enjoying this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just found this story. I am a Reptilia28 challenge fan, but as many have mentioned, too many of them go abandoned. Glad to hear this one will not. Like your writing. It's sad that finding someone who can spell and conjugate a verb is a cause for happiness, but unfortunately it's true. My only complaint really is your paragraph splits are sometimes not where I would put them...but given the usual level of writing around here, that's pretty minor. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry should just surrender to the inevitable and set aside some time on weekends to give autographs. I'm really enjoying how he's dealing w/ Draco in this. A good story so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Marvelous! A perfect blend of canon and fanon, I'm assuming/hoping there is to be a widening divergence from canon as your plot threads progress, and you have a delightful beginning of what portends a terrific story. Thank you for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved Hermione cussing up a Blue streak at Ron. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loving it! At this point, even if Harry doubts it, Hermione has got to be thinking that Harry would be about the perfect boyfriend. She just needs to signal to him somehow that she is interested in moving that way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Knowing what was coming and three years more magical knowledge and Harry couldn't come up w/ a better plan then flying on a Wooden broom? Really, A Wooden broom against A FIRE Breathing Dragon? That never made sense to me in cannon let alone in a redo story. Despite having fore knowledge Harry still seems to be relying heavily on luck. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good to see Dobby already. |