Reviews for Harry Potter and the Last Chance
Red Phoenix Dragon chapter 5 . 5/21/2016
A good chapter for the aftermath and sad Dumbledore is already interfering to get Ronald back with Harry. After not telling Harry not just about the dragons but also not telling him about the information Charlie sent him on their strengths and weaknesses. How can Harry tolerate someone so vile and untrustworthy. Good Hermione hit him but he and Dumbledore will use that against her. Malfoy will have a field day when he finds out.
Good to keep Hermione and Luna close but will they be the targets of all the witches like Ginny.
Good Luna's friendship with Harry has Ravenclaw scared silly.
So how is Dumbledore thinking with his weapon so powerful?
Will Harry get Rita to look into Sirius' case?
Thank you for sharing your story. Please update soon.
TJK78 chapter 5 . 5/20/2016
Great chapter. Thanks for sharing.
AnFan-n-More chapter 5 . 5/20/2016
Wonderful story! Just found this one, but it immediately got put into my Favorites list!

While the premise has been done before, and there isn't much new yet to what others have done, your story telling ability is wonderful. You make the story come alive with the way you tell it and that makes all the difference. I think that people complain about cliched plot points and trite or predictable works not because they don't like those cliches but because the author of the stories they complain about lacked to ability to tell the story well. My hat is off to you.

I'm really looking forward to reading more, and it's very likely that this story will be one I read more than once. The smooth flow of the story and the upbeat feeling from reading it even when bad things happen are worth rereading!
scarletkiss18 chapter 5 . 5/20/2016
I'm enjoying this story so far, nice to see harry acting a little more mature but he does not seem to be really using his knowledge of the past to do anything about voldemort coming back...
Rimtuuk chapter 5 . 5/20/2016
Great story, and if you want to kill Mo-Ron off in some painful yet humilating you have my vote. Will this turn out to be a HP/HG/LL story? Even thou Hermione is soulmate there is always room from some Luna Lovegoooood.
Vegasman59 chapter 5 . 5/20/2016
On to the yule Ball, I hope he has the Balls to ask Hermione and Luna together. That would Drive the castle Crazy, not counting Skeeter! Great chapter GO GO Hermione!
narusakufan1985 chapter 1 . 5/20/2016
This sounds good so far. Please continue. Harry and Hermione forever.
L H Barbie chapter 5 . 5/20/2016
Just finished reading the first five chapters of Harry Potter and the Last Chance, I believe this is the best Harry back in time story. Please find is this one.
CCBottle chapter 5 . 5/20/2016
Awesome chapter. Sering Hermione give Ron what for was really satisfying. I wonder how Harry and Hermione 's relationship will develop. The ball will be announced soon. Hopefully Harry asks Hermione and there isn't any forced drama like many fics do.
Sampdoria chapter 5 . 5/20/2016
I am absolutely over the moon happy I found this story, I love it and can't wait to read more:-))
Ronin Kenshin chapter 5 . 5/20/2016
great fic like your version great work
starboy454 chapter 5 . 5/20/2016
a another excellent update
Ronin Kenshin chapter 4 . 5/20/2016
wow awesome chapter so cool great work
Darlok chapter 5 . 5/20/2016
Love the direction the story has taken. As someone who dislikes Ron's character for his action such as the ones done during the fourth book towards Harry, your final events this chapter seem a more logical conclusion. Any further bashing I highly support. When Harry takes Charlie's team to render the basilisk down perhaps Harry invites Rita down so he can for the record state what truly happened in defense of anyone still having doubts from that time with possible backups of pensieve memories that Rita could get pictures taken from. I can only imagine Hermione and probably Luna will be especially clingy during such a situation. For the next task I hope Dumbledore stupidly tries to get Harry to reconsile with Ron by using the red head as a hostage or perhaps Ginny in an attempt to spark a relationship in order to get Harry away from Hermione and Luna. But as a final result only perhaps save Fleur's sister instead if Hermione isn't Krum's again. Then maybe perhaps Harry could publicly announce the reason why he didn't such as Ron's betrayal and and bad behavior towards himself or of Ginny having possibly trying to poison him with love potion beforehand.

Anyways whatever is decided I hope to see a new chapter up soon and look forward to see what you planned next.
athenakitty chapter 5 . 5/20/2016
Cool Ron bashing from Hermione. Just surprised that she didn't kick him in the nuts. Not unless that's reserved for something else. Will this wake up a few people to Dumbledore's manipulations?
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