Reviews for Harry Potter and the Last Chance |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter like the early intro of luna. And the fact that the head lioness wants to tell harry about the dragons but can not...that must be greating on her nerves. Wonder how she will handle hermione going for her little swim after christmas. (Though hopefully not as victors hostage) Then again if harry and hermione are bonded by then, will they be able to kidnap her for the task. Love the prank gobstones. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Best reason for saying "... some Granger girl." ever. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter can just picture the twins faces when they realised how easy it was to get past tbe age line. Glad harry has bonded with dobby. Always like it when ggat happens. (Why oh why oh why did JKR have to kill the little guy) Should be interesting when harry tries explaining that to the future mrs potter. Maybe he can get help digging out the relevent info from neville. |
![]() ![]() ![]() 3. A good start to a Reptillia28's 'Don't Fear the Reaper' challenge. With a walk in the forest death and return to Halloween GoF. Your Ronald is particularly nasty but will a grown mature Harry be able to cope with Ronald's jealousy, immaturity and childishness? Good to strengthen his friendship with Hermione but he needs to ask her the right question before the first task. Good to deal with Hermione's teeth but he seems to have forgotten about them after dealing with Rita. Good to befriend Luna and thought Luna would get the exclusive interview or be Harry's press agent. Neville ? Harry should be very wary of any monitoring charms and find out who cast them. Great dealing with Draco and Snape. Will Ephialtes be able to guide Harry as things change? Thanks for sharing your story. Please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well you could always make it shits and fits, Thre opposing stones Saying Dunderhead can't you do anything right in The voice of Snivelous Snipe...LOL! Great stuff, can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this challange. Looking forward to seeing what you do with it. like the almost snape like reaper. |
![]() ![]() How this is really good, very enjoyable can't wait for more, good job. Update Soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am enjoying Harry's sense of humor. Please keep this going. |
![]() ![]() Yes, definitely like these changes and it's realistic! |
![]() ![]() I always loved this challenge and can't get enough of it. Thanks for this and I look forward for more! |