Reviews for Harry Potter and the Last Chance
Krande chapter 17 . 12/1/2024
Ok, so Harry after running away from V' whole year and losing people like his godfather made him a supersoldier who can battle Dumbledore and Moody and the entire Order if needed. Cool.
Guest chapter 29 . 11/29/2024
Um. Did he leave the Stone on the floor of the manor?
Krande chapter 16 . 11/29/2024
Ouch.
Sirius's threat sounds very dangerous in a world of magic where words might gave un-thought-of consequences. He promised, in a bout of overprotection of his godson, that, under given circumstances, he would 'destroy what makes Hermione's life worth living,' aka, he promised to kill Harry.
And he's a thoughtless Griffindor whose attitude had already cost him twelve years in Azkaban and his mental stability got only worse since.
Guest chapter 24 . 11/29/2024
Wonderful chapter. Kinda sad towards the end.
Krande chapter 15 . 11/29/2024
This chapter's highest is Harry giving that 'you are useless' speech, looking down clearly from his 17-year-old self's eyes but with the temperament of a boiling teenager. Yes he knows much he logically shouldn't (unless you count being killed a dozen times already, plus consequences) but I want to see his face when the time of the Battle of Hogwarts comes and he suddenly knows nothing new info because he'd been dead at that point.
Krande chapter 14 . 11/29/2024
I love the 'everybody home' montage, especially Draco :)
Guest chapter 21 . 11/29/2024
Waste to destroy the cabinets rather than keep them to make use of himself.

Or let them be used so he knows they're coming and setup a trap like blowing a whole hallway up and getting the group. Now he's clueless and doesn't have the link in his head to even attempt rooting out info.
Guest chapter 18 . 11/29/2024
Considering Sirius spent his 20's in Azkaban the old comments are severely distasteful.
Guest chapter 15 . 11/29/2024
It wasn't even remotely believable for him to be shocked by her words and go with them. She slapped and despised Ron while happily being with him all year. It was such blatant bs it shouldn't of had him believe them at all.
Guest chapter 14 . 11/29/2024
He does have other means to track Harry. He has the blood tracker that he gave Ron later on. That wasn't a new device.
Guest chapter 13 . 11/29/2024
Slightly annoyed Harry didn't correct Amelia and say Trial. Not retrial. Since he didn't have one which means Fudge is breaking the law aswell and she should be able to force it since its not a retrial.
Guest chapter 13 . 11/29/2024
I hate that these stories have Fudge as all powerful at the ministry. That no one can force things like Bones to the Wiz for all to hear and stop Fudge from himself stopping things. That he as minister somehow has authority of that like a King to stop anything and everything including aiding a known terrorist and somehow Bones can only sit back and let him?
Guest chapter 12 . 11/29/2024
Wish he told them to make sure Fudge doesn't have them kissed before they can be questioned and to mention Peter's rat form before he conked out.
Guest chapter 11 . 11/28/2024
Well that's a fucking shifty ending. Saves Cedric's life and is fucked over by him in the process.
Guest chapter 11 . 11/28/2024
Wish it wasn't so common for him to destroy them. Be better if practically all the stories where he doesn't he didn't then go and ignore the items and actually made use of the diadem and stone.
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