The one negative I can think of is so far there's an impression that he's not made any plans on what to do about Voldy during the third task. Or keeping fudge packer from having Jr kissed before he can be questioned.

There's also the lack of using Skeeter to out the fact he knows from third year his godfather is innocent. Multiple witnesses and that he never had a trial.

I adore Luna. Too bad he didn't also get permission to bring Luna who's too young to go without a 4th year date.

If he didn't ask her I'd hope the reaper showed up in his dreams and give him a swift kick in the head for being an idiot.

Hurray for the rendering chances. Now if only this story was a Lunar Harmony one rather than just Harmony. Sadly few have him with both.

And just like with the Basilisk he won't claim the dragon and others will profit. This time from a poor mother dragon defending her eggs. Always hate this part.

A fan of the reaper setup but not of how full of it they are when they blame him unreservedly for his deaths.

Also annoyed this one somehow regardless of how many people he comes across literally didn't remember any info on someone who's died a supposedly absurd dozen times. Except at the very end with the Granger girl comment.

Now we to to the next chapter where Harry will likely remember the warning about being portioned but put absolutely zero thought into WHO would've or could've portioned him into being with Ginny. Whole continuing to mope about Ron who if I remember right didnt even apologize after the fact with the dragon nor put two and two together about Charley being there. Though I suppose he maybe didn't know Charley was and it was kept secret?

Either way I don't remember him apologizing. Just bullshitting and realizing he may actually be getting setup to be killed after all and then tag along again once his fame shot up again.

Him letting Ron get away with the wormtail comment of all things without being knocked on his ass is annoying. Especially when it would take fairly little for Ron to be their Wormtail. Willingly ar that rather than being forced to betray them.

Awww cool!
I love te 'fruitcake' and your writing of aurors in general.
Harry's luck is typical, he survives and badly ends up in the Hospital Wing. At least V' is messed with more, this round.

Small note, though. The scene when Fake-Moody is stunned was very hard to follow, like, as if Hermione asking why Pettigrew was alive and it could have been either her firing the stunners from her pocket, or Harry next to her hip. A few half-sentences added to that would be nice.

Awww, cool!

I love that banter with the portrait.

The changes of not time travelling people's characters seems to be making a dent on this world's reality and I wonder just how much it'll get weirder. Cool!

I feel a bit bad about how Viktor Krum's personality changed is such a short time. In the original timeline he and Hermione remained friends and penpals.

I need to double-check whether this will be Drarry or not :)

Ron doesn't seem to act like the one who had already supported Harry up to the Battle of Hogwarts, so, maybe this might be an alternative timeline Death had thrown Harry into? Did Harry's previous deaths also start a new world, perhaps with Ron being different in each? Just curious.

Oooh. A wonderful exampke of 'adults are useless' and meanwhile I can't help thinking of poor Death wondering what he'll do when-not-if Harry gets himself killed again.