Reviews for Identity
sabsfan2 chapter 12 . 6/16
It's strange to read Bail's thoughts about Leia. We always assume that we "know" the true Leia, before ANH. It's interesting to see how much she's changed in his eyes. Especially the rank and file comment. War changes you and she's definitely had enough of it to be a different person. It will be interesting to see how their relationship evolves. Poor Luke, he'll never get any info about his family!
sabsfan2 chapter 10 . 6/16
It's an interesting twist to have Bail think Leia was dead. I hadn't considered the political spin that the Empire would put on her capture. Bail's disorientation is understandable. It's going to take him a while to decompress and catch up. Bail recognizing Luke's eyes was a bit shocking for Luke. I can't wait to read more.
sabsfan2 chapter 8 . 6/13
I liked Dansra filling in Han about Alderaan and their customs. I hope it helps him help Leia with the coming storm. Dansra's views about Luke were hilarious. It's hard to shock Han but she did manage to do it.
sabsfan2 chapter 7 . 6/13
THere's nothing like 4 people trying to decide who you are going to marry. I'm glad that Mon told them to chill but she's not very emphatic about that. I'm not sure how I feel about her in this story. I also think Leia's refusal to accept her parentage limits Luke's ability to bond with her. It's like they aren't related at all because she had her perfect family on Alderaan with acceptable parents and admitting to being related to her parents destroys her memories. I was kind of surprised to hear say she knows Mon knows about their parents and she didn't ask. Another great chapter.
sabsfan2 chapter 6 . 6/13
I feel sorry for the amount of baggage that Leia carries around in her head. That she feels she has to choose between Han and her people is sad, but understandable. I can't imagine living with the consequences of all the decisions she is in charge of. Great writing. I feel like I'm in the space with them because your writing skills are so good. You really understand these characters.
sabsfan2 chapter 5 . 6/11
Horm needs to be put in his place. I like how in their faces Leia is about Han. She's entitled. She knows that he'll always have her back, which is more than she can say about most people. And he's a great guy who is really hot. I think scoundrels are really underappreciated in the rebellion. The science doesn't bother me. I never paid attention to it in school and it's just a vehicle to get us to DRAMA! Great chapter. I hope to see more Luke and Han. I think their relationship is complicated by all the Leia angst.
sabsfan2 chapter 4 . 6/11
These two have such an interesting relationship. Most writers just instant friend them, where's there little conflict between Luke's innate positivity and Leia's brutal realism. It's good to see them feeling each other out and trying to figure out how to navigate a new relationship, especially in light of what a return of Bail might bring regarding the truth about their birth and parents.
sabsfan2 chapter 3 . 6/11
I love how Han was good enough to save the Rebellion but not good enough for Leia. I love Rieekan's attitude and Mon is a bit cold in this story. Maybe is the same internal politician that Leia has in her. I love how cautious she is, not willing to think or hope her people might be alive. It's what protects us in the end. Great chapter!
sabsfan2 chapter 2 . 6/11
I really like the way you write. You set the atmosphere in great detail, with so much going on around the characters. It's a great mix of dialogue and introspection. Han and Leia are great when you write them. So complex and yet so simple. She loves him and doesn't much care what everyone else thinks.
Guest chapter 2 . 3/29
Such strong characterizations and wonderful internal dialogue…this story never gets old
Corellianjedi2 chapter 26 . 1/19
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LukeSkywalkersLeftNut chapter 32 . 6/9/2021
this chapter was too short. lol your a tease. i keep waiting for han and leia to commiserate their relationship in this story but poor han keeps only getting to second base. is it me or is there something hot about leia talking about vader in bed. i picture leia wearing a black negligee and cape. also she may or may not be thinking about someone else. please consider riding a sequel to this story. you have crafted a wonderful world. sequel. sequel lol
LukeSkywalkersLeftNut chapter 31 . 6/8/2021
Leia smiled indulgently at her aunt

whoa nellie furtado. for a second i thought you were gonna go somewhere else with that indulgent smile. lol bravo for that chapter. i was crying during the wedding it was so romantic and classic han and leia. thank you for not having winter and luke get together. that would have been the ultimate betrayal to leia. it is sad breha blew up in space and couldn't witness her daughter's wedding. thank you for a beautiful chapter. your very talented and have taught me new words. i think you probably did well on the language part of the SATs ( a test for future collegettes) i am looking forward to the epilogue. i hope those two have a great honeymoon. i think there will be sex.
LukeSkywalkersLeftNut chapter 30 . 6/8/2021
i love how long the chapters are in your story. this was a great chapter. am i delusional or did rieekan and leia have non platonic chemistry in that first scene? they were flirting and i was enjoying it. i never thought id say that gfo
LukeSkywalkersLeftNut chapter 29 . 6/7/2021
this was a great chapter. it was a relief to have a light chapter after all the drama in the previous ones. lol i love that we got to see the fun of han hanging out with the guys. although fyi there isn't a gavin darklighter character in the star wars universe. i think you made up that name. i'm not sure you should be making up fiction in your story. besides that tiny quibble i loved this chapter. more han and the guys stuff please. your so talented.
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