Reviews for Identity |
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Guest chapter 2 . 5/1/2016 Very nice |
Dalia chapter 2 . 5/1/2016 Omg this is so exciting, so worth the wait! I already love it to bits. |
Guest chapter 2 . 4/30/2016 I love this! Already waiting to see what comes next! |
artoo chapter 2 . 4/30/2016 Wow, I really like this! Such a promising story. Nice work. |
Mermaid 32 chapter 2 . 5/1/2016 Ok, I'm hooked. Keep writing this story! |
solo-kid chapter 2 . 5/1/2016 I'm very interested in where this story will take us. I am curious to see how the ship and the crew survived without detection during the war, and how it is surviving in the remains of Alderaan if it is so dangerous there |
Stoned Rose chapter 2 . 5/1/2016 Oh, wow. I cannot *wait* to see where this goes. Am loving it so far. |
Ludmila Wase chapter 2 . 5/1/2016 These first chapters are awesome, great AU |
starlockedst chapter 2 . 5/1/2016 I'm loving this so much and it's only the first chapter. Amazingly written! |
Mako-clb chapter 2 . 4/30/2016 I'm loving this so far. I can't wait for the next chapter. |
Indy788 chapter 2 . 4/30/2016 I love this a lot already! |
banzi chapter 2 . 4/30/2016 Can't wait to see what happens next! I have a pretty good idea but to read your story is going to be awesome. Leia has too much sitting on her shoulders. One of the only people who expect her to only be Leia is Han. They are very good for each other. Since this is an AU can we hope for a happy ending? Anticipating wonderful things. Great beginning to your story. |
19sweetgirl96 chapter 2 . 4/30/2016 I absolutely loved this. I think you have wrote the characters well with multiple layers from leias conflict with legacy as an organa and skywalker, political pressures and situations, Hans insecurities, etc. I love this. For a moment when someone knocked on the door I thought it was bail and was preparing myself to be disappointed because that seems a little suspicious and a not very well thought out plot. I love how you talked about how there have been distress signals before. I hope when bail returns it's in a capacity to be a politician and a father. I think that Fics with bail portray him in a specific, very similar way so I am interested in seeing how he is developed after five years later. Also hope that Luke makes more of an appearance once bail is announced to be alive (I would love to see an interaction between bail and Luke as well as Han and bail). I think it's interesting how you are portraying leis as struggling more with the organa legacy not the Vader legacy. It will be interesting to see how she reacts with bail over time. On one hand, you have your father who you've mourned and missed and loved. On the other hand, you have someone who tried to protect you by lying to you about a brother and a father (I think the brother thing is what she would be more upset because she lost this chance to grow up with her best friend). Long story short I loved it and hope you update soon! |
WeylandCorp 4 chapter 2 . 4/30/2016 This is really good so far! I like that your using EU! Just a few things: will Luke and leia ever announce their twins? Why did the empire crumble so quickly if your using some EU stuff? And who will their kid/kids be? The EU kids or Ben? Either one is good but I'm just wondering. I'm really liking this so far and I hope you update quickly! 10/10 |
The-Solo-Smirk chapter 2 . 4/30/2016 I loved this! I always interested in stories that make Han & Leia deal with her political persona. But of course, they manage. Cute! |