|Reviews for Death Doesn't Give Chase (She Waits)|
| Robert Harrison chapter 5 . 5/12
I found this more by accident than intent. I was on my phone, in the car (as a passenger, don't worry), and went to open one story when we hit a bump and my thumb landed on this one.
I think someone wanted me to read it.
The premise is intriguing. I honestly havn't read many MoD stories, I tend to not like them, so unless they have a particularly interesting sounding summary they usually get passed over.
I find the format you use for this story, despite being disjointed, works well. Snippets of a universe in which everything is connected, yet nothing is dependent on anything else. It feels like opening up a box of old home movies and pulling tapes out at random.
Something particular I want to bring up is chapter three. That chapter, by itself, has pretty much made my day. Had I found it as a standalone story, I feel I would have enjoyed it just as much. That chapter spoke to me, personally, far more than any of the others do. So, I thank you for that.
I hope you have plans to continue this, there is a lot of potential here.
| naritaluv chapter 5 . 4/3
i love how u made hariel death!
| Senyor Fier Mensheir chapter 5 . 3/17
These past 5 chapters have been beautiful.
| Dustier7 chapter 5 . 3/2
This is amazing, feed me more, I need MOOOAAARRRR! Great story I love how everyone's interacts with Harriel, I hope you update soon! :D
| Furionknight chapter 5 . 2/10
I look forward to more :)
| Squishy4953 chapter 1 . 2/8
Oh my god.
I know what happened to her.
| Guest chapter 5 . 2/3
Aww. Adorable. I love it!
| Silvermane1 chapter 5 . 1/30
Can Ichi sisters see their grandma
| steffy1405 chapter 1 . 1/30
| Riibas chapter 5 . 1/24
Beautifully written. Yamamoto's was my favorite.
With this last chapter I want to see a chap about the day Masaki died. Does Hariel come for those who die as a human? Or only those who finally truly die as a spirit? Or both? Since she obviously doesn't ferry souls into the afterlife, that's what the shinigami do.
Keep it up, happy writing.
| musme chapter 5 . 1/22
I like it
| momocolady chapter 5 . 1/21
| kaiirine chapter 5 . 1/21
I hope you continue this story cuz its awesome and I definitely enjoyed it a lot.
Looking forward to your next update :)
| Beloved Daughter chapter 5 . 1/21
Cute! Love this! Can't wait to read more
| history chapter 5 . 1/21
Ahhh it's so cute!