Reviews for Death Doesn't Give Chase (She Waits)
Guest chapter 1 . 5/15/2016
Lololololol, he was poking her chest. Oh, the frankness of young children!
Vein is Simply Tired chapter 3 . 5/15/2016
oooohhh niceee, marry me :3 !


Thank you very much for this one too :D !
moon so bright chapter 3 . 5/15/2016
That was lovely! I have always felt that Yamamoto could use a solid friend, and here she is.
Mukuro234 chapter 3 . 5/15/2016
GaleAeras chapter 3 . 5/15/2016
You write well. I love this. Post more soon.
Lady Lily Anne chapter 3 . 5/15/2016
That's a new concept, that you can only see her only upon accepting that you will one day die. How did Aizen manage to see her then? Is he under the perception that he will meet her again one day, but only upon accomplishing his goals and in doing so, he will be able to destroy her and not die at all? And it adds another level of interest in Ichigo. He sees her at such a young age, and I don't believe his mother has died yet. So how has he already learned of death and accepted that he will eventually die, at least enough to the point that he can see her? I think that would be an interesting drabble to read about. As for the timing of Genryusai seeing her, didn't you sort of hint that it takes place right after the Quincy War ends?

Speaking of Quincies, Ichigo is descended from Hariel through his Quincy mother. Does that make all Quincies related to Hariel, or is it from a different non-Quincy descendant that married into the Quincy line? Because if Yhwach (I hate spelling his name) is Hariel's descendant, I don't think she would be too pleased with his actions. Although, it sort of would explain why Quincy kills are so final, in comparison to a Shinigami. But conversely, wouldn't the balance of souls also be part of Hariel's duties as Mistress Death, making the Quincy's abilities an abomination to her?

Now, for some odd reason, I'm imagining a random encounter between Hariel and Shunsui; he can see her because he knows that his best friend will die and one day so will he, but he doesn't know who she is. He just sees a pretty lady and starts flirting, and she gets all exasperated.

As you can see, this fic leaves lots of random thoughts in my head and I can't help but to write them in my reviews. I hope you don't mind, and feel free to use anything in this review if you like it. Thanks for updating!
Cormin12 chapter 3 . 5/15/2016
That last bit there? Nicly done.
LunaSunFlowerLily chapter 3 . 5/15/2016
Thanks for the update
Der Puppenmacher chapter 2 . 5/14/2016
I find her to be very condescending.
Mukuro234 chapter 2 . 5/13/2016
This is awesome
Daemonia Azrael Di Oz chapter 2 . 5/13/2016
Oww I thinks I like yours style on writting.

Thanks for chapter.

D. O.
Blue Fire Lily chapter 2 . 5/11/2016
Holy guacamole that chapter sent chills down me spine - Hariel was epic!
"You may call me Death" - best one liner ever! Fantastic chapter!
Doombug chapter 2 . 5/10/2016
woo that was an awesome two chapters, I really enjoyed the little is here and I hope you write more of this so far awesome story.
FrostyMan122 chapter 2 . 5/10/2016
Hmmm, I'm not really a fan of the fem!Harry stuff, always feels like the author is trying to hard with it, but this is something I've never seen before. Think I'll see were it go's, yeah?
Vein is Simply Tired chapter 2 . 5/10/2016
why not? this is a perfectly good story :3

Thank you for making this :D #looking forward to the next one
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