Reviews for Death Doesn't Give Chase (She Waits) |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful beginning I'm excited to read the next chapter when it's updated. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Will you make this a full length story? |
![]() ![]() ![]() i want more! plz update when u can |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh, I like this. I would love to see what you have in mind for future chapters! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i cant wait to see the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this idea so far. One question, though. In cannon Harry was born in 1980. So for Harriel to be Ichigo's great-great-whatever grandmother did you then move the HP events far into the past or an alternate dimension or something else? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Wonderful story you have going here! I'm very much looking forward to seeing where this is headed! Haruel as Ichigo's grandma sounds really cool, and I'm looking forward to seeing how her presence will end up changing the plot. I wonder how the Shinigami will react to her? Or Ishida? Ishida and Ichigo are cousins, afterall. It makes me wonder if he and the rest if his family know about Hariel. Does the fact that Hariel is related to Ichigo make her a quincy? Are quincies maybe an offshoot of wizards? How does the wizarding world key into all this? I'm also rather curious about how the timeline works in this. You said that Hariel is Ichigo's many times great grandmother, wich dosen't fit canon timelines. Is Hariel from an alternate dimension then? Did she jump universes and end up hundreds of years in the past? Or did the world end and the reset? Great story so far! It has a lot of potential and can go a lot of places. I can't wait to see where you take it. And do ignore that nasty reviewer who flamed the story. Your writing is wonderful, so don't get down! Good luck with writing and may writers block never grace your home. I'll see you next chapter. ~Metronome |
![]() ![]() ![]() ohh this is just so sweet. love it |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Love this! Just ignore that first review. I don't know what crawled up into their butt and died...you are very well written and the premise shows promise. I look forward to the continuation of the story. Though I wish it would be longer than one shots! Lol XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg. i love this. if it all one-shots, are they interconnected with? becuase i really love the idea of hariel being Ichigo's grandma. XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! First of its kind I've read. I adore the relation. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This seems interesting so far, I am looking forward to more! |