Reviews for Thranduil and Girithalation
super monkey chapter 6 . 2/17/2003
meanie! u killed her!

i cry now.

Sage Twilight chapter 6 . 2/1/2003
That was very sad! I can't wait until you finish Malleta! Just don't forget the cardboard car! The GOC rules! (And also strikes from above). ;-)
M0R0N chapter 6 . 2/1/2003
This is one of the few romance fics I'v enjoyed. One thing: Tolkien states that Oropher was Thranduil's father.
TDWidow chapter 6 . 2/1/2003


Very good.

I only have one suggestion: in Sindarin, possesives are placed after the noun. So, "my love" would not be "nin meleth," but "meleth nin." Just fyi :)
TDWidow chapter 5 . 1/30/2003 Legolas is so cute!
Sage Twilight chapter 4 . 1/30/2003
You are doing a great job. I wish the chapters were longer, though. And even though I know that you are the only one, except maybe Elizabeth, I can't help myself.

TDWidow chapter 4 . 1/29/2003
Ooh! Ooh! Is the baby Legolas? ;)
Lothlorien chapter 1 . 1/22/2003
i'm sure this is a very lovely story, but it belongs in the LotR fanfiction... where it will probably get more reviews anyhow.
TDWidow chapter 1 . 1/21/2003
Very good start! Thranduil has such little written about him and I'm curious about the story of Legolas' mother. Write more :)
Sage Twilight chapter 1 . 1/21/2003
Good job.