This story has a man's romance. And I mean the other meaning of the word.

disappointing. the council thing, these weird human grimm and all that ridiculous latin was kinda trash but i liked the interactions and Jaunes background

really the council?

Really interesting premise of story and character. I loved it all the way through.

Damn I wish there were more

He may be OP, but he is a deserved OP.

I really loved the story and am quite sad about it being discontinued. Thanks for sharing though i was an awesome read.

You write fight scenes very well, I hope you come back to rewrite this story

Dude I don't understand why rwby and npr are like this hes very strong and he used the strength what's wrong with that they made it like he made a mistake but yours story awesome

This is... Pretty good, but you're downplaying Silver-Eyed Warriors here.

Going to beacon out of convenience

WTF, where the hell are you? What happens with the successor?

I really love this story so far, it’s a shame it’s been discontinued (even if there is a rewrite in the works). I hope the new version can live up the original. I also find it hilarious how despite not wanting your story to lead into a harem/polygamy route, all the chapters so far have built an almost perfect foundation for one. The poll to see which ship sails has led to you keeping each path open and thus made all of the girls have pretty adorable relationships with Jaune. I don’t know how I feel about you accidentally doing that so well, when so many others have really tried and failed. Kudos to you, I suppose.

Ayyye, waiting on this rewrite. Badass stroy all around. Make the second just as good as the first and it'll be a hit.

I fail to see why Jaune, who is supposed to be able to off hordes of Grimm unarmed, would be awed by someone "going hand to hand with a bewolf"