My question is why Yang is so paranoid here. Nothing else has changed, everyone else is the same. So what happened? What twisted to change her in that way? There is no reason for it that I can see which makes it all the more jarring in the weirdness of it.

Hello,
this is a really good story! However, I'm not aware of any characters called Laliah. Could you tell me if they are a character I've missed, or if the explanation will come up later in the story? it would be deeply appreciated.

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Really enjoyed this story, hope the rewrite comes out soon.

So, here's the thing. Why does it need to be Jaune that tells everyone about his past? Nobody else is offering up theirs.

Like that Berserk reference, if it is one.

i dont knkw hlw i feel about this story. it seems like kts always pointing oit how jaune is stronger than any other student but then when it comes dlwn to the situations that that could be shown it winds up as still being the canon. you did what many do by setting up a strong character but then making a reason his strength cant be used which in terms oh character growth is good, but when it comes this, it feels like hes just super gimped.

Vote-ALL THE PAIRINGS.

Man, I ain't done reading chapter one and I think I should compliment your writing, ITS SO GOOOOOOD! GUHAHAHA I hope you keep up with the good work. Kinda sad how this is discontinued, I could learn a lot from you. But with that said I shall go back to reading and being a slobby excuse of a potato

When Jaune talks I'm just thinking of that sloth from zootopia.

ok

Dang I even shed a few years when Jaune shared his past...it wasn't some overly descriptive thing that makes you picture it perfectly but it was vague enough and so...broken I guess that it was just as, if not more impactful...wow

Wow...I really love the story so far...you have such a great talent for writing as I find myself being hooked on every word so far the plot that's begun to flesh out is enthralling and so different from the many cliches that fanfiction falls into and that's the thing some time people don't mean to copy others' idea but with thousands upon thousands of stories for the many popular shows out people will be bound to have similar ideas to one another and that's what I love about the story so far as it's so unique in my opinion

I read the messenger speaking in Caboose's voice, and it was magnificent, Looking forward to the new story.

well, thats certainly an ineresting way to announce a rewrite

...Damn it... I had gotten really excited when I got the email notification too.