Bless your muse for this story. Absolutely loved it

Still one if my favorites. :)

This was absolutely beautiful, you did wonderful for this to be your first fanfic. You are a natural born writer

I really enjoyed this!

I expected her preggers long before this actually! Lol!
You have two paragraphs repeated in this chapter.

I’ve noticed that you use the word ‘weary’ incorrectly. You use it interchangeably with ‘wary’. Weary means tired or beaten down while Wary means cautious or suspicious.

I love your portrayal of Greg Goyle.

LOVE LOVE LOVE this story! Especially the relationship between Lucius and Hermione-well done! :)

The concept of this story was good, it was well written and I loved the dynamic between Hermione and Lucius. However, I felt that considering Hermione and Draco was supposed to be 'true love', their relationship wasn't a good one at all. Hermione seemed like a pushover who wasn't allowed to be angry or upset and Draco was very controlling and manipulative over her. Throughout the story there wasn't many moments were they would just sit and talk, it was either just sex or them never seeing each other.
Please don't take this as a negative review, it is a good story, I just couldn't get into it.

Unless by magical intervention hermione can’t have sex for a couple months post birth. So the sex only a few weeks from birth would be medically not allowed, at least for muggles. I’m sure there’s some potion to help speed up recovery for witches

suit- formal wear
suite-fancy hotel room

weariness-tired
wariness-trepidacious

really good story, fixing these spelling errors would make the reading go smoother

thank you for your good story

This is the best story I have read in a long while. Thank you

great story!

I loved this story. Very nice job

I particularly liked your epilogue with closure on each of the characters.

Very satisfying

I'm going to check now if you have done any offshoot stories.

Really enjoying Goyle!