Much better, I read the first draft yesterday and was so disappointed in both characters. I'm glad you revised. So, what is the mysterious cause of Hermione's unwellness?

Great chapters. I'm glad that Hermione has found out about the blood bond although I would have liked it to come from Draco instead. I'm also glad that Draco is trying to acknowledge his feelings for Hermione.

If Hermione and Draco were really thinking this through, wouldn't they get ahead of the scandal by putting the story out there themselves about the bond? If some random old wizard is walking around talking about it, people will find out. Better to take control of what and when the public finds out. Isn't this some kind of lesson wealthy, pureblood, business owner Draco should already know?

I find it interesting that it didn't occur to Hermione that Draco would take the ring off. How would she feel knowing that?

I think that if Hermione looked up the word idiot in the dictionary, there would be a picture of Draco.

Hi! Im really liking this story, but there is a few things I didn't like in this chapter. I think Hermione is a little different, she just forgave Draco before he even apologized, and his apologie wasn't even that good and then she apologized for her reaction, when it was completly normal when you hear your husband, who is supposed to be your soul mate and you're falling in love with, say love is a weakness that he will never allow himself to have. He made no gestures or gave any indication that he was sorry about not only admiting he will never love her, but also being a absent husband ever since they got married. He can also be very controlling and disresptiful. I'm not trying to tell you how to write your characters, but their conversation went very different of what I was expecting. Also, in the end when Hermione finds out about the blood bond, she apologies to Draco, like it was her fault. Why would she do that? I'm sorry about my objections, I tried to be respctifull, because I don't want to offend you and I do really like this story and look forword to see what is going to happen next. I think that Hermione is acctually pregnat, based on some things you wrote, but I may be wrong. Again, sorry and good story.

I'm going to need Draco to grow the heck up and use his words lol. And right on Narcissa for setting him straight young man. He needs to have a talk with his father and understand just because Lucius has made mistakes about affection and love and trust and emotional maturity doesn't mean you can't strive to do better in his marriage. And I really like Goyle in this story :)

Oh my so many updates in one day

i was wondering when u'd get back to that.

does this mean hermione can feel dracos emotions? (he HAS to have them even if he refuses to acknowledge them.)

H }:)

That's crap why should she apologize? He tore her heart out and he blames her for it?! She should tell him to suck it she doesn't want to be in a relationship or have a family with someone who can't and won't love her. I thought at the end of the last chapter they were going to fight it out not get just her roll over and let him do whatever he pleases while she suffers. Is this how she's going to be now? Some meek little wife with no backbone? I hope not because I've come to love this story and that's not who you've written her to be please don't turn her into it.

He is still an ass

You are a dumb ass Draco

They BOTH need to grow up and Ginny did NOT help with her attitude of keeping him out . She has no business interfering in a marriage like that. I have to side with Hermione's mother on this. No matter how awful Draco is at the moment Hermione isn't doing either of them any favors by running off and avoiding the situation like a coward.

BTW, is Draco's whole attitude due to what Kingsley said because he's pulled a real Dr Jekyll and Mr. Hyde here. It throws the whole story off to me. It's like there's two different stories here that you're trying to make into one.

Wow... I hope this gets resolved quickly I hate when she's hurt by him.

Yes, Draco IS a tool, as you put it. He DEARLY DESERVES to hear that the plane crashed with all aboard presumed dead. And then to have to worry & wait in AGONY before finally hearing from Dean, (you know, the one WITH a phone and that ACTUALLY DOES CARE about Hermione), that she appareted herself & her parents to safety at the last moment!