i'll try to name 5, but my original timeline lore knowledge isnt the greatest
cage

kang

I stand by this is one of the best chapters you written, though all of them are good. But this is one of the few ones that shows how much you understand the characters, story, setting of the game. Kitana's pain of seeing sindel brainwashed and corrupted and then free of her brainwashing

This is the true sindel, not that pathetic joke of a retcon in MK11. Not only it destroyed her character, but the way also NRS told it in the game's story was not even good. People

Hehe, well that was cheeky of Goror eh?

I would've preferred he actually died and never came back. The same with Kitana and Liu Kang.

These are way better treatment to the MK kharacters than what NRS came up with, I enjoy your vids on YouTube and didn’t know you wrote until watching all of the videos of the same name and decided to read them for myself and I’m not disappointed. Keep up the good work

Have to say, but this is a WAY better scenario than what the MK11 story has given us. The story really didn't have enough time to really delve into this whole situation, and really didn't even needed this whole situation had they decided not to kill Sonya off at the beginning of the story only to just bring in the Past version of her the very next chapter, causing Cassie to go through the same sh*t she went through in the MKX story (and yeah, I'm still bitter with that whole thing. Really think that should have been taken better of.) I can't wait to see how you'll do Jin's reaction to seeing his Cousin and Liu Kang since we never gotten one for some unknown reason. Seriously, why make Jin related to one of the OG characters if you aren't going to have them ever interact with one another! They could have just used Kai, which I'm surprised they haven't used him in the Netherrealm timeline since I can definitely see some banter with him and Jin similar to how Liu Kang and Kung Lao banter with each other...guess that whole theory that they only care about MK1-3 really does stand huh...

Better storytelling than the average NRS game lol
I feel a bit bad that I don't find Frost appealing as you do. In my opinion she's not like Skarlet or Mileena in the sense that a redemption arc seems natural direction for her character. Frost being a villain is fine but I think NRS just has a shit motivation for her. But regardless the level of thought you put into her is amazing.

Very good! Justifies Quan Chi's stupidness in the game. Also I always hated how everyone thinks that Scorpion is a hero and Bi-Han is a villain while they are both just neutral assassins! I too thought that Shirai Ryu clan's price was annihilation of Lin Kuei

2 Liu Kangs In one body is an interesting concept but i always had a theory. What if firegod Liu Kang was not the past but the present one. He admitted having the remenands memories,the tactics he used in the aftermath,and his battle against the remenands fellt oddly personal.

i don't understand what kind of appeal Frost gives that fanfics try to make her sympathetic when in canon she was rotten and power hungry since deadly aleance.

True on both Mileena and Shang Tsung man
Glad to have read this

I love how you give Reptile more justice than what NRS did to him! I really was rooting for him in MKX and a little bit in the MK2021 movie but no!

Good job, 4thSnake!

Amazing. The idea of having Raiden being the one who hired Bi Han to kill Shang Tsung is amazing.

ABSOLUTELY AMAZING. This fan fiction makes my world of Mortal Kombat look like shit. No one really cares whenever the main character wears something his father or his ancestor wore but this one sounded beautiful. Kung Lao being heartbroken because he lost instead of being this annoying ass bitch like he is in the games and Liu Kang trying to comfort him was amazing.

Million times better than Shawn Kittelson story. The original timeline was good but this fan fiction is a masterpiece. The way Bi han and Tundra talked was so well done.