Reviews for Thor Help Her |
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![]() ![]() ![]() The whole “oh there’s a mysterious force stopping me from explaining things” is a total cop out. I don’t care if there’s some narrative excuse for it later, it’s a cop out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What an interesting premise, and so very well written. Looking forward to seeing what happens. Just wondering now if her older self is now in her younger body. I think that everyone has the fantasy of wondering what would happen if they were their younger self with the knowledge and experience of their older self. In my case, MUCH older. I just discovered your writing, and am a huge HTTYD fan. Also new to fan fiction (as of March). |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy fucking shit my dude, like. Goddamn, I need a new pair of panties after that |
![]() ![]() I just watched the hidden world and balled my eyes out at the end... Anyway great job with writing... I am a fellow writer but I write science fiction books, however I sadly don't have any published. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story ️️ I |
![]() ![]() So: 96k words of Hiccup going ever deeper into Astrid and a little bit of Freya being an asshole. Beautiful, 10/10 |
![]() ![]() ![]() One of my favorite HICCSTRID stories so far. A job well done. |
![]() ![]() What the fuck? But like, in a good way. |
![]() ![]() Really. Enough is enough. Hiccup really needs to find another girl friend. This has gone on longer than any normal person would let it and since Hiccup is not the one to "force" the issue his only other option is to leave Astrid. And this he should of done at least a couple of chapters ago. |
![]() ![]() Yeah... I noticed the bulge too... WE CAN BE PERVERTS TOGETHER |
![]() ![]() WHAT IS THAT TEA?! Maybe it’s like a contraceptive to stop her getting pregnant? But... they haven’t... in a while...? Okay now I’m just confusing myself here |
![]() ![]() ![]() are you seriously telling me that hiccup horrendous haddock iii willingly and purposely gave astrid MOON TEA without her knowing, damn son |
![]() ![]() ![]() You know a story is great when you go back to reread it, not once, not twice, but three times. I’m not sure if your still on FF. But if you are, just know that I loved this trilogy of yours and that this stays on here forever. Thanks for the great, exciting, and emotional stories! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lo ame! Muy bueno! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story has way too many cockblocks lmao |