Reviews for Thor Help Her |
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![]() ![]() ![]() That tea I don't remember it's name but isn't it for that Astrid don't come pregnant? I'm pretty sure of that. And wow Astrid is so stubborn... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its moon tea a mix of herbs to prevent unwanted pregnancies from happening and i like how poor astrid suffers from not knowing this hiccup keep up the awesome story |
![]() ![]() Wow this chapter is frustrating in such a good way. There's such great cliffhangers here, I'm even more curious to know what happens next than I was before. I have a thought about that tea, but gosh it could be so many things. I was absolutely thrilled to see a new chapter again so soon and I'm really looking forward to the next! I'm so glad I can lend my support. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am guessing some sort of contraceptive tea |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was certainly an interesting dream and my curiosity has been awakened...what is the tea?! Beginning to wonder if Hiccup knows something about what's going on with her. |
![]() ![]() Again, very well written! I know some people aren't taking to the intro and retrospection, but I think it's quite a brilliant literary move, especially for this sort of story. Technical literary stuff aside - I loved this chapter. It's a great representation of Hiccup and Astrid in this situation (with their current mental/emotional standings); I like the attention to the emotional aspect of it all in balance with the physical stuff. You've got me really looking forward to the next chapters, I can't wait to see where this goes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The smut is pretty hot. The awkward Astrid trying to resist Hiccup is hilarious. The twins are funny as always. Really well written, looking forward to any new updates. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow this chapter is hot and well I dont like Astrid in this chapter because she looks very submissive and that isnt the common attitude of Astrid |
![]() ![]() I love this story so much! Poor Astrid! How is she going to get out of this? Without having to hurt Hiccup? |
![]() ![]() I had to read the latest chapter twice. Holy hotness..! This hot to be one of the hottest Hiccup's I have ever read. Poor Astrid, hopefully she will tell him the truth. It's almost like she is re-experiencing everything with Hiccup. I wonder how it would have been if it was the other way around, 16 year old Hiccup would probably cream his pants rofl |
![]() ![]() ![]() Daaamn, Okay now, NOW that Freyja has pretty much had her way is she allowed to tell him that she's actually from the past? Okay it'll be hard now that its been a month and... and that event just happened but.. Like come on! Freyja cut her some slack! |
![]() ![]() This story is so, so, so, so good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dang! That was quite a chapter. I'm surprised she was able to stop herself there after that display. Next time, she might be a goner and Hiccup is a saint. |
![]() ![]() Amazing story so far, love the build up and can't wait for Astrid to finally crack |
![]() ![]() ![]() Intimate like bumping uglyes or like heated make out session ? |