Thank you for such an amazing story, I just finished with it and you nearly made me cry for this chapter! I will read the sequel! 5 stars!

God Damn! Did I have a fun time reading this. Almost missed a deadline because I couldn't tear away from. Good job and thanks

I'm really enjoying this so far! But where are they rest of the Berk Vikings?

Great story a sequel would be fantastic. Definitely look forward to Hiccups growth

Congratulations for your first story. you do a good job and make me think that the second part will be so great too. hope you continue to do more story of HTTYD thanks.

Wow...what the Fu...this chapter blow my mind. wow this was great.

Yes! A sequel would be fabulous. I've been following this & I've really enjoyed it.

loved...

great chapter...well done

SO GOOD. I just read the entire thing tonight and it was SO GOOD. Kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time!

I love this chapter. Although, I can't remember what it was Hiccup said at the forge that he couldn't stop thinking about here. I went back and looked, but I couldn't find anything.

Awesomw story! and love already the first chapter of the sequel. Also I would really like to read the aweakening of the older Astrid after the coming back of the younger one, please think about it!

I assume what the point in this story. 16 year old astrid has some feelings for Hiccup, but refuses to them by be a viking warrior. so the goddess of love wants to show her what they will have in the future, so she can finally accept the love she has for Hiccup . Of course this is only a theory because I only read to the chapter 5 and I not finished the story yet. the second part if you do one, must be with the side of hiccup, je je je. oh as for what is the Te for I assume it's to avoid pregnancy as an already has been used in other stories. thanks for the history is great.

One small issue with this chapter, when they were sitting around the fire telling stories, about shared adventures, it is strange that someone did not mention an adventure they had with Astrid, that she did not remember.

I understand that she cannot talk about what happened because of a cone of silence Freya has put on her, but it is strange that Hiccup is not starting to suspect something, and when sharing stories with each other, it should have been obvious that she did not remember some of their adventures together, which such have tingled Hiccup’s Spidey senses.

Other than that great story so far

Oh man. It was just getting good. Do a sequel please.