Reviews for After the Rain
Guest chapter 29 . 1/21
Honestly this should have had an angst tag bcuz minato and the village’s attitude is absolute bullshît i hate how realistic it iss
umaiwe chapter 47 . 11/20/2022
I just wish you still alive and kicking somewhere on earth, keep coming back here to re-reading on my spare time from chapter 1-47 including After the Rain drafts, but you don't have time to continue because of commited to work and pandemic certainly ruined everybody's life, honest opinion, really, this story is too good to be abandoned
ReviewerPops chapter 10 . 10/30/2022
poor shino... He no longer exist in the time stream. Though if Choza likes men then Choji would only be born in order to have an heir to the clan.
kuromi123 chapter 47 . 11/1/2022
This was so amazing I absolutely binged it in one night
Pinkypi chapter 40 . 10/31/2022
Rookie 8. Assuming Shikaru is the only one with a twin? Or another uchiha Sasuke's age is around. then it's be up to 9 again :D
Pinkypi chapter 38 . 10/31/2022
Shikamaru has a twin and coming from the Nara's in a way in feels like Shino's soul was still born just into another family it's weird and probably doesn't make sense.
Pinkypi chapter 29 . 10/31/2022
Minato was being reallllly stupid here. All these pieces in front of him and all the facts. The worst being to treat her like shit after she's already done everything she could to prove her loyalty without looking insane. Minato didn't even believe it despite so much evidence stating otherwise yet used that to condemn her for not telling them. It was hypocritical. And yes like shit otherwise he wouldn't have made the last comment. She absolutely loves Konoha and he has her memories to prove it. To even hint she would go back on the agreement, he would've hurt her less if he'd just stabbed a kunai into her kidney personally.

Nothing against the story I'm just bashing Minato here because his word choice could have been better so that he wasn't shredding her insides to pieces when telling her what was going to happen.
Pinkypi chapter 28 . 10/31/2022
I understand your logic as it is sound. It also works with this story. However take your steps as a timeline in order instead of all at once. Yes all previous Jinchuuriki have died the second it was removed. The only other Uzumaki was already dying of old age when it happened and so there was no previous test data or known knowledge of anyone ever surviving it. Kushina survived long enough to help reseal it into Naruto was the first time it'd ever happened. So when Zetsu said that he was referring to what was previously assumed to be 100% true and then learned Kushina held on a while. As was Kushina believing she'd have died as was Minato when he decided that it'd be better for Kurama to be sealed in Naruto instead of left to reform. With that information the assumed absolute truth could be wrong. Then later was proved wrong when Naruto was the first one to have his Bijuu removed but managed to survive long enough to have the yin half of Kurama used to replace the yang half. Conceptually had any of the other Jinchuuriki been able to survive long enough to have it resealed they would have.

Even running on that logic. Kushina's body could still have just been breaking down in general with everything happening to her. The poison designed specifically against power houses. All her previous wounds. The fighting against having her seal forcefully broken causing more damage since in canon she was already too weak from childbirth to fight it so the removal by Obito was much smoother rather than a brutal removal. The amount of time before she finally got medical treatment all combining together to make it inevitable and pushed past the point of return even in a best case Scenario where one of the two decided to go into Kushina on their own.
Pinkypi chapter 22 . 10/31/2022
Ironically... Minato overlooked the one person who could probably actually intuitively learn it. Considering seals are practically in their blood and the fact Orochimaru has trained her in multitasking constantly. The logic behind seals is most likely intuitive to an Uzumaki where normally she wouldn't go along with logic at all. There's like no other explanation for a clan who'd all mostly have personalities similar to Kushina and Naruto to all be good at seals to the extent they outstripped everyone else in their use of it, if it wasn't something that comes naturally to them.
Pinkypi chapter 21 . 10/31/2022
ohh wow. So. Naruto just fought the frontlines of the Kanabi bridge mission?
Pinkypi chapter 20 . 10/31/2022
Shisui is good. He's like a calmer but more active Obito in his character but that'd kind of all we know other than the fact that like Itachi he was willing to go against his family to keep the village safe.
Pinkypi chapter 19 . 10/31/2022
Stupid ass Boruto begs to differ :C Poor Kurama uwuwuwu
Pinkypi chapter 13 . 10/30/2022
Yeah well... Naruto has one Advantage no other Jinchuuriki has ever had. She was literally bathed in the Chakra of her Bijuu from the literal second of her conception until the day she was born then immediately had said bijuu sealed inside her it's literally been Naruto and Kurama since her conception. Not only would that amplify her natural gifts as an Uzumaki it'd make her extremely compatible with Kurama's chakra.
Jaye chapter 47 . 8/14/2022
This is really good. I hope you come back to finish it. I want to see how Shi and Naru romance develops.
DragonANGL chapter 47 . 7/6/2022
Still on hiatus, closing in on 3 years now...I'm hoping you do return to it, eventually!
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